4/5

Hey I just wanted to tell you that you did a great job and I absolutely loved it.

nice story

Gave it a try because I loved the premise of seventh horcrux, but voldemort going to a Beatles concert and playing gituar? No. And now a edgy Harry talking in a icy voice?

Dropped and not returning.

The first thing that came to mind to me was that Voldemort felt REMORSE for Harry’s situation. Gah! I’m actually excited to read more of this story!

We never did find out how Voldemort acquired his new body. I wondered if Harry had died and come back to life as you hinted that he was failing before this or did he wish for a sibling and accidental magic do the rest? I wish you hadn't finished the story with voldemort still wanting to kill harry, after all he seems to have feelings for Dora, so why not develop them for Harry too.

Chilling! Poor Harry!

Love this! Great story, I need more anti-hero voldemort in my life :P

Ha. Knew it. I knew it was the Elixer of Life. Awesome. This story was amazing. That "Power the Dark Lord Knows Not"? Yeah. Coming back from the dead by deciding not to get on a magic train lol. You're a good writer.

WoW
I loved how he actually was smart this time
His conversation with Merope actually made me consider her in a very different light

Very cold calculated and cunning

great story. the ending is somewhat krass. very doomsday-y.

Its hard to read this story. Too many errors.

excellent story

Story's well plotted, and with a fine premise. But it alternates between dry and depressing reading. "Vito" is a bit of a Gary Stu and barely believable.

Another great story. I wonder if squibs were affected the same as non-magicals? You've created your own effects of using the elixer of life, so that works in your story. You used the story elements creatively and originally. Bravo!