Reviews for Yes, I am Harry's Brother |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Wow. Okay so Voldemort discovered that Elixir of Life keeps wizards healthy but it cures then kills muggles because their bodies can't process the magic or did he tweak it to be a poison to them? It's interesting that he's decided to repopulate the work with wizards because I think that'd just be a different host of problems. I like that Harry got a big family but I hope that one of his females actually likes him for him. I hope that Vito doesn't eventually kill him. I can't believe that Voldemort would name his children after his muggle sperm donor and his mother. I thought he despised her for being weak. I guess he can get away with it because the only ones who would recognize those names are long dead. Thank you for writing. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I think it's funny that Voldemort plays the Beatles with his brother. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I thought the people were upset for Dumbledore employing a vile person like Snape and now they're upset for Dumbledore plotting to get Snape murdered? |
![]() ![]() ![]() I don't get why Vito is trying to convince someone 6 years older than him they're soul mates. And I really really really hope that after all this that Voldemort doesn't decide to still kill Harry. |
![]() ![]() ![]() That last plot twist...mind blowing. |
![]() ![]() you named your children Tom and Merope, finally acknowledge that mother knows best xD you combine the black and slytherin families, the only 2 we know with a bloodline, parseltongue and metamorphing |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'd have to say in this scenario the power he knows not would have to be plot armor and he can't know it because he now has it instead. Barring the intervention of any out-of-left-field chekhov's gun's that is. At least I don't think it's Lore was mentioned before the 7th book it's been quite a while since I read the actual books themselves and not fanfiction. I think a better summary for the story would be ""Voldemort Wins"when's Voldemort was bestowed plot armor"." |
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![]() ![]() Hey I just wanted to tell you that you did a great job and I absolutely loved it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() nice story |
![]() ![]() ![]() Gave it a try because I loved the premise of seventh horcrux, but voldemort going to a Beatles concert and playing gituar? No. And now a edgy Harry talking in a icy voice? Dropped and not returning. |
![]() ![]() ![]() The first thing that came to mind to me was that Voldemort felt REMORSE for Harry’s situation. Gah! I’m actually excited to read more of this story! |
![]() ![]() We never did find out how Voldemort acquired his new body. I wondered if Harry had died and come back to life as you hinted that he was failing before this or did he wish for a sibling and accidental magic do the rest? I wish you hadn't finished the story with voldemort still wanting to kill harry, after all he seems to have feelings for Dora, so why not develop them for Harry too. |
![]() ![]() Chilling! Poor Harry! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Love this! Great story, I need more anti-hero voldemort in my life :P |