|Reviews for life is hard|
| Edhla chapter 1 . 5/8/2013
Very topical piece with some lovely imagery. I did find that there were a number of punctuation and grammar errors that rendered it very hard to read in parts (the absence of capital letters from the beginning of a sentence, some missing commas, etc), and if it were mine, I'd format so that your A/Ns are very distinct from the body of your work, as it's a little difficult to tell where one ends and the other begins in this format (at least on the mobile site.) Still, enjoyed this. Thank you for writing x
| Grey Wolf4 chapter 1 . 3/21/2013
Lacks capitals but I was able to get the gist nevertheless this was pretty decent.
| James Birdsong chapter 1 . 6/17/2012
Good oneshot somehow