Reviews for The Secret
Guest chapter 9 . 1/26
I really liked the plot up until now, but this chapter is a bit fucked up... what the hell is this thing about guardians?!
KnellaLuna chapter 15 . 7/28/2013
I started reading it thinking it was gonna be a good nalu story but now I just can't read it anymore...
Happyyy chapter 5 . 9/3/2012
Okay I just wanted to say before I continue this story, that this story is good but there is one thing you have to do. Put a divider between the story and the authors note. Sometimes it be annoying when there isn't a divider. Maybe add a line a symbols like 'XxXxX' or 'ooooo'. Or you could also make your author notes bolded to deprecate it from the story itself.
GoldenRoseTanya chapter 17 . 9/1/2012
GoldenRoseTanya chapter 16 . 8/30/2012
Vongolafan16 chapter 16 . 8/30/2012
That was awesome. The kiss inuded;). What is the name of the next story so i can continue reading.
CupcakeGirl633 chapter 16 . 8/29/2012
ohh i can't wait for the sequel!
CupcakeGirl633 chapter 15 . 8/29/2012
ohhhh they're gonna kiss
GoldenRoseTanya chapter 15 . 8/4/2012
somebody smackk him!
Guest chapter 15 . 8/4/2012
soooooooooooooooooooooooooo confusing.
yet still interesting.
GoldenRoseTanya chapter 14 . 7/30/2012
he he i'm evil chapter 14 . 7/30/2012
Master master master I can't believe u made him declare war and he didn't know what for
GoldenRoseTanya chapter 13 . 7/27/2012
Alice Harkey chapter 12 . 7/26/2012
Whoa! Things are getting super intense! Lucy isn't really just going to leave without telling Natsu, right? I mean, he's going to be so mad (and possibly scared) when he finds out that she's leaving.

I really want to read more about the whole 'mate' thing. It seems like you brought it up and then just kind of dropped it. Oh, well. I'm sure you'll explain everything in due time. So, Update soon please!
Never again 10 chapter 12 . 7/25/2012
interesting story
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