Reviews for Escaping the madness
unknown chapter 4 . 7/21/2012
great
unknown chapter 3 . 7/21/2012
Some Is are lower case and "he" is all upper case.
Guest chapter 3 . 7/21/2012
bv.,;.
Link200 chapter 1 . 7/21/2012
type more. Otherwise good
Skylar Owens chapter 12 . 6/28/2012
I love it! :) when will the other story be up? Will it be on this page or as a new? PM box me please!
Skylar Owens chapter 10 . 6/11/2012
Love it! I hope Jim can save them! When dose break start? I'll miss you!
Livin Livv chapter 2 . 6/11/2012
It's SUPER SUPER good! But just a little feedback I think you kinda rush the story a bit! Maybe add a lot more details and show not tell;) But I still love it when we act out your amazing stories! And maybe even write your own book on here!

-O.
Skylar Owens chapter 9 . 6/10/2012
Love it! :) your so fast! :) thanks lots of love! Hope to here from you soon!
Tisuro chapter 9 . 6/10/2012
I was just was just reading trixie belden and the never ending story so i thought, jim? I thought that that was trixe beldon! and I expected jim to say "wait, you inserted a microchipinto my family! when and how?
Skylar Owens chapter 6 . 6/9/2012
I Love it! I can't wate to read more! :)
Skylar Owens chapter 5 . 6/8/2012
I love it, please update soon!
at chapter 3 . 6/7/2012
WRITE,WRITE,WRITE,WRITE,WRITE,WRITE,WRITE,WRITE,WRITE,WRITE,WRITE,WRITE,WRITE,WRITE!
at chapter 1 . 6/7/2012
good job! I KNOW WHO YOU ARE AND WHERE YOU LIVE AND WHAT BUS YOU RIDE! try not to use that(a) man to much unless you're emphasizing that they REALLY don't like them.