|Reviews for In the Middle|
| Mechabeira chapter 9 . 12/19/2012
So, the storm will rage, as storms sometimes do, and eventually they will realize that they still haven't gotten to the talking phase of "getting it right."
I just love that. I LOVE it. Can we just take a moment to think about how lovely and perfect and truthful that is? Yes? Ok. Thank you.
| EowynGoldberry chapter 9 . 12/1/2012
Glad they got it right finally:) Hope you had a good Thanksgiving.
| Anonymous033 chapter 9 . 11/30/2012
I LIKE IT.
I like the ending.
You are SO good at this; it's so short, so concise, and yet it describes their long, complicated relationship perfectly. I don't know how you do it. I applaud you.
| Phosphorescent chapter 9 . 11/29/2012
Another wonderful drabble.
| mon-petit-pois chapter 9 . 11/29/2012
You are so good at this. This was perfect, unique, and I love your use of parallel structure. Phenomenal work!
| dvd123 chapter 9 . 11/29/2012
Yay, you're back! And it seems like they're finally getting on the same page. :) Then, I look up and realized this is the last chapter. :( Anyways, this series was beautiful.
| Amilyn chapter 9 . 11/29/2012
Oh, SO GORGEOUS! I *love* the "still haven't gotten to the talking phase" ...but they're getting it right. Just...JOY. You're awesome.
| Phosphorescent chapter 8 . 11/9/2012
Another wonderful drabble.
My favorite sentence: 'She steps out into the open, letting the rain sluice across her skin, letting the wind whip her hair into a tangled frenzy, letting the rumble of thunder and the slice of lightning soothe her heart.' [Very atmospheric - I can see and feel the storm here.]
| Anonymous033 chapter 8 . 10/18/2012
OOH. Kiss in the middle of the storm; I love that.
I love the way you've written this, too; using so few words to express so many emotions. I love it!
| Guest chapter 8 . 10/14/2012
Yesssss! Lovely imagery. :)
| Jelenamichel chapter 8 . 10/14/2012
(God, I can't be bothered logging in.)
This thing is killing me. I love it.
| magickmoons chapter 8 . 10/15/2012
Oh, if anything deserves a SQUEE! this does :) Beautiful imagery with the storm. The whole piece is very tactile, very visceral. I love how ultimately it wasn't about what he said or she said - no words at all. Just them :)
| EowynGoldberry chapter 8 . 10/14/2012
I liked that he kissed her, curious to see her reaction. Did you enjoy the premier? I liked it. Hope you had a good weekend.
| alexindigo chapter 8 . 10/14/2012
YASS! Finally! Haha, can you tell I'm overjoyed? :P The dancing has stopped I see...good on you Tony. Thanks for sharing Jen! :)
| CrimeShowsNumber1Fan chapter 8 . 10/14/2012
Yay! I really liked this chapter!:D keep writing and update soon!:D