|Reviews for In the Middle|
| dvd123 chapter 8 . 10/14/2012
Oh my, this chapter was beautiful. So little words with so much imagery. The need to fix this with Ziva is important. He crossed an ocean for her, what's a little rain gonna do? xD
| Ryalin chapter 8 . 10/14/2012
Loved this chapter a lot. Very descriptive, and the fact that Tony would venture into the storm for her made my heart melt.
| Amilyn chapter 8 . 10/14/2012
Oh...oh YES. I love the "willing the cold to make her numb." I love that she's certain that Tony will not sacrifice his suit...and that he proves her wrong...but that his words are inaudible, and that HE recognizes that they have a bad history at talking so he needs to ACT. Perfect. Absolutely perfect. I LOVE the structure of the titles of the parts of this. Love.
| Anonymous033 chapter 7 . 9/22/2012
This is good.
They're coming closer and closer to "fight." I really hope that he is adept at cutting off Ziva's sentences.
I really enjoyed this chapter!
| EowynGoldberry chapter 7 . 9/21/2012
I want to know what Tony is going to do! Hope he doesn't think he has to keep his deal...
Did you like the Bones premiere? I thought it was all rght. I was actually not going to watch it but I was at the gym and there was no NCIS on USA at 7. It used to be, but they apparently have moved the stupid wrestling to start at 7 instead of 8, grrr. Major Crimes was on TNT but I decided I didn't want to get into a new show so watched Bones. I didn't see all of it since I didn't want to overdo the ellipitical, but I did go back and watch the end on the treadmill. I liked the B&B reunion. I thought how Pelant got away was dumb, I am so sure. Why couldn't they just do something simple like he escaped?
| M E Wofford chapter 7 . 9/21/2012
I always think he should just haul off and kiss her to shut her up sometimes.
| Mechabeira chapter 7 . 9/20/2012
Complex, dense, layered...what else could I put here?
Her pride is just so...prickly. And he's going there...
| alexindigo chapter 7 . 9/20/2012
Oh look, they're doing their dance again...Sigh. Thank goodness he's not planning on holding on to that ridiculous bargain (right? Unless I misread the whole 'he'll make this okay' part). Hehe. Can't wait for the next one. Thanks for sharing Jen! :)
| Amilyn chapter 7 . 9/20/2012
EXCELLENT. His fear of failure, her prickly pride, her attempt to talk over him, and the idea that he's ready to go all in-and cut her off mid-sentence (scarier than fighting bad guys!). Nice work there!
| Pitselehvv chapter 7 . 9/20/2012
I find it very interesting that while these stories takes place in medias res, we also find ourselves in the middle of an even larger story. Nice layer complexity, J. I'm very eager to read Tony in the middle of fixing it. Nice job.
| dvd123 chapter 7 . 9/20/2012
I feel like I keep repeating myself, lol. You just pack so much emotions in so little words, and the emotions just seem to amplify even more. I'm glad to see that Tony doesn't want her to misunderstand his actions, but I'm wondering if his explanations will make her pissed off. Ziva is practical. His deal really is sweet and touching, but I wouldn't be surprised if she found it to be a bit absurd. xD
| CrimeShowsNumber1Fan chapter 7 . 9/20/2012
Heck yeah he needs to stop her! She has to know how he feels! LOL! Me going a rant... great chapter of realization! I hope you can update soon!:D
| Anonymous033 chapter 5 . 9/20/2012
Oh, wait :(
I skipped a chapter by accident. That's what catching up after being busy for a month is like, hahaa.
He can't be serious. Oh god (no pun intended), he makes really stupid bargains. Oh no :(
I don't know how this is gonna be resolved.
| Anonymous033 chapter 6 . 9/20/2012
Oh, no :(
Poor Ziva, to have to fight that fear. But why is Tony distant? Is she imagining it, or is he really keeping away for one reason or another?
And it must be awful, too, to be thinking about whether her position on the team might be replaced; whether she'll ever recover in time.
Update soon, please! No pressure, but I am really enjoying this :)
| EowynGoldberry chapter 6 . 8/30/2012
You are very good at writing a lot with few words. I hope Tony doesn't walk away from Ziva. She deserves better if he does!