Reviews for In the Middle
Anonymous033 chapter 2 . 7/11/2012
I don't know how you manage to make something so short sound so depressing (in a good way), haha. It's a talent!

You're so good at conveying their emotions through so few words.

It breaks my heart, seeing how hard she tries and how little she manages to move forward :(

-Soph
Phosphorescent chapter 2 . 7/10/2012
Another insightful drabble.
JMHaughey chapter 2 . 7/9/2012
I adore these drabbles. . .

. . . stuck in the middle of nowhere. ;)
Amilyn chapter 2 . 7/7/2012
I like he reference to how she doesn't trust her own inner voice on whether she's found the right person. I think I wanted more punch on that concept, though.
Leah339 chapter 2 . 7/7/2012
Awww beautiful *.*
jae-vous chapter 2 . 7/7/2012
I love your writing. You convey so much with so little
Alidiabin chapter 2 . 7/7/2012
I love this look into Ziva. She need direction so very much. Wonderful.
magickmoons chapter 2 . 7/6/2012
Another wonderfully poignant entry.
Phosphorescent chapter 1 . 7/1/2012
Absolutely wonderful! I'm impressed with how much you've managed to fit into this drabble.
laffers18 chapter 1 . 6/27/2012
It's possible that I love this more than I should, for the length that it is! LOL

But it's just...you say so much with so few words.

*adds to list of reasons to stalk Jen*

Brilliant.
Alidiabin chapter 1 . 6/14/2012
Ooh drabbles. I like drabbles.

I like this. I like the metaphor of the middle of the road.

This is wonderful.
ncisduckie chapter 1 . 6/10/2012
...Very short. I have to say i don't understand it, though. Sorry :(
mprmusings chapter 1 . 6/10/2012
Indeed...i love the prompt "in the middle"...it's a place we all find ourselves at sometimes, isn't it? Looking forward to more! :)
Anonymous033 chapter 1 . 6/9/2012
That actually sounds scary, for all the sweetness that it is. Haha.

I love how you've written it, though. What he can have, and what he can do, and how that might eventually change.

I really love it.

-Soph
magickmoons chapter 1 . 6/8/2012
w00t! 2 jsq stories in two days! Is it my birthday? *checks calendar* Nope, just lucky, I guess :)

I really like this, the imagery is wonderful. I love how well you paint the picture of their past, present, and potential future(s).

Can't wait to read another!
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