Reviews for Mouse Traps are Cross Dimensional Portals
GoldenLombaxGirl chapter 4 . 5/13
IT CAN'T END THERE! I WANNA SEE MORE!
AnimePriest chapter 4 . 8/9/2014
Ohh! I can't wait for more! Please continue!
Callie982 chapter 4 . 2/27/2013
Very cute and interesting! Can't wait ti see what happens to Luffy ;) Please update soon! :3
Kazuo Nashima chapter 4 . 12/1/2012
I wonder what will happen to Luffy next... Pls update soon, okay?
twonormalgirlsandaiportal chapter 4 . 11/16/2012
the Noah have brought a terrible evil upon themselves, i feel sorry for them.
Guest chapter 3 . 11/4/2012
XD
Guest chapter 1 . 11/4/2012
O_O luffy is a pest? then allen is a pest? then why are both sexy?
twonormalgirlsandaiportal chapter 3 . 10/31/2012
OOOOHHHH boy, luffy is a dead man. HEY LUFFY! IF YOU COME OVER HERE I'LL GIVE YOU A DINOSAR!
backa usagi chapter 3 . 9/28/2012
lol still love it(despite its length) and yea rhode wouldn't take much liking to luffy unless she saw his serious side or just saw him kick someones ass but its good!
Someone chapter 2 . 9/27/2012
This is a really nice story please continue to update it,I really really liked it.
Btw it's not 'toke' its 'took'
PoisonousDemon chapter 2 . 9/23/2012
has luffy an innocence or is it just because he is from another dimension that he can kill akuma
love your story
backa usagi chapter 2 . 9/19/2012
i love it so far! but it would be greatly appreciated if you could updated more often and make longer chapters, if you can't i understand.

But i love it!
PoisonousDemon chapter 1 . 7/18/2012
you did start the challenge very good
I love the story
Guest chapter 1 . 6/29/2012
good story like to read more
backa usagi chapter 1 . 6/7/2012
Haha good sense of humor