|Reviews for Broken Hearts|
| Gentle-Valera-Fox chapter 12 . 12/10/2013
I read a few of your notes, but after a cliffhanger or something similar I'm in to muc hurry to get to the next chapter.
| Guest chapter 16 . 12/9/2013
* shouting * DIZZY! WHERE ON EARTH ARE YOU?! YOU HAVEN'T MADE A CHAPTER IN OVER A YEAR! GET OFF OF MINECRAFT AND WRITE THE STORY! For Pete's sake.
| TrustyFoxy chapter 16 . 12/7/2013
LOL, I'm stuck at minecraft too! Just back away from the game, and start working xD
| EcoReibun chapter 16 . 12/7/2013
Wish you luck
| Guest chapter 16 . 9/23/2013
I'm loving this story! It's so good! Who screamed? What dose red x have to do with it? Oh update soon please! And get sleep!
| Dragonscorch chapter 16 . 9/13/2013
This is really amazing! I just hope you continue soon. (evil cliffies...) XD
| Ghost Raven of Azarath chapter 7 . 8/29/2013
Dude I love this story! I know you said that you wanted to finish but maybe you could write a concluding chapter? That'd be awesome! I'm rooting for you!
| Angel-With-A-Shotgun99 chapter 16 . 8/19/2013
Plz write more soon!
| BamboozledChickadee chapter 12 . 8/13/2013
I have fun reading your notes at the bottom of each page! They are always entertaining..
| BloodyInSaNiTy chapter 16 . 8/4/2013
I freakin' LOVE this story! It's so awesome! And YOU, my dear author, need a thousand Internet hugs for writing this. I can't wait to read the next chapter, I bet it's gonna be great!
| dwfan4 chapter 16 . 7/22/2013
I think this is amazing, I read every author's note. You really should update, I know you're busy, and I don't want you to run yourself ragged. I told someone else about this story and they're going to read it.
| Irrelevant86 chapter 16 . 7/13/2013
Please write more i love this story it's so funny! The hole time i was reading this i was practically laughing my ass off, i couldn't stop reading it because it's so good!
| LOLer chapter 16 . 6/21/2013
Burnz, why are u critizing his writing? I know why all of them didn't trust him at points because I KNOW how each character works and the Terra part. If you don't know why they do that, then watch some episodes on Boomerang or YouTube. As for the Robin part, dude, he is the Dark Night's sidekick! He would have noticed something wrong! He has awesome detective skills! BTW I love this story 3
| Comment Reviewer chapter 1 . 6/13/2013
Burnz, that is just their writing style, so I wouldn't critize it that much. And characters do have their derp moments, right? sweethearts, your right, that is kind of funny! And something he would do for some reason or another... And the Guest under sweethearts, I truthfully have no clue how to help you...
| Burnzs chapter 16 . 6/4/2013
Its a cool story. I do like it and I want to read more, but your story has many, many, MANY inconsistencies. For starters, I'm not really sure which titan to side with, as you start of with Robin helping and every one but beast boy mistrusting him. Then you change where everyone earns his trust. Then you have Raven no longer trusting him. Then you have him being trusted again. then you have Robin not trusting him and Cyborg defending him. this whole time, you have Danny going bouncing back and forth between the two spectrum of either being happy or depressed.
Also, your description could use a little work as you tend to be repetitive in what you say. An instance would be where a line said:
"I hope he's okay," Beast boy said, hoping his friend was okay.
There were several places that had similar things. Just keep in mind that you don't have to describe everything that happens as your readers are usually smart enough to figure out what your character feels if you just use dialogue. The only thing I would think you need to make clear is when your character is being sarcastic or joking.
Any way I guess I'm waiting for the update if you still work on this story.