nah babe ur writing style is awesome, the way you write is captivating

This fic is a whole damn mood. I don’t get why she didn’t go to him

As a person ever loving someone who won't, this fic was amazing. The way it will come and go in the most unexpected ways, in the fingers of a stranger in the bus, in the curve of a stranger's eyelashes, in the exact color of a certain food. The end really spoke to me. How five years or ten or eight dissolve into nothing under an specific moment. and then it passes and you go on with your life.
The way Bella felt about Jasper, the way she live her "best years of highschool", the way she knows she's doing it because she's bored and the way she acknowledged it mark her in unspoken forms. It all took me back to being 15 smoking pot to numb the ache of a loss, to being 13 felling in a misunderstood love, to being 17 and admitting I like girls more than boys. Your writing really took me there. to memories I had buried and the ones I treasure.
Thank you for writing this and keeping it posted here. Hope you are doing well.

"I'm in that mood where aí either want to be cuddled or fucked" is such a good line. such an honest, sharp way to describe that mood. You are an amazing writer. and I'm just starting 8th chapter

WOW what an ending!

Oh that’s really sad

The poor girl is neglected in her grief
Recipe for trouble
Thank you

all your stories end sad...you're kind of a bummer, right?

This aaa excellent, thank you!

i am so in love with this and with you this is one of those things that just changes your whole life fuck wow

Please tell me that our Edward isn't fucking married to ANGELA of all damn people!

What a little whore... and what a big dipshit

thank you so much for great story

This kind of hurt me to read. But it's so dang beautiful that I want to clap, and cry, and smile really large all at once, but not too large because that's just...dramatic. Anywho... I loved it so so much, and I honestly believe you are a brilliant storyteller and you completely captivated my attention and held it for most of my work day, because I literally just found this story early morning and now I'm almost off shift (like 3hrs-ish-n-sum more to go), so I thank-you tremendously for that, seriously I was so bored!

Don't know everyone's ages in this story. But say Bella is 17. We'll go against canon and say that Renee was 30 when she had Bella. That makes Renee 47 when she died. That would make Grandma 42 when Renee was born, if she died the same year as Renee (kind of old for a woman of her time to be having kids).

But I'm assuming that Renee was the young mom she's supposed to be. That makes grandma REALLY old when she gave birth to Renee. Highly unlikely.