Reviews for The Empress of Thunder
Happy reader chapter 16 . 12/8/2012
Yeeah! Its updated ;D i know you would, yeaah, vacations and new stories, what could be better? This whole plot makes me think on the song for Makoto:
Running through the middle of a storm
I can't dream in this dark night
Don't embrace loneliness with open arms
Thunder, run from here to wherever you are
Then tell you that we believe you
With ten thousand volts we believe you

*We will give you strength, natural forces
Because we are all by your side
The earth and forests, the grass and trees

It's all right, we believe you
It's all right, we believe you
It's all right, we believe you

We do believe you

Bound tightly within the darkness
I can't stir an inch in this dark night
Don't give up on the light you reached for

Thunder, run from here to wherever you are
Then shine bright, we believe you
With ten thousand volts we believe you

We will give you life, natural forces
When you feel the courage rising in the earth
And spilling from the voices of song

It's all right, we believe you
It's all right, we believe you
It's all right, we believe you

We do believe you


We do believe you

jojo, it fits perfectly X3
GhostWriter73 chapter 16 . 12/7/2012
Whoa... Great battle! Personally, I reckon Saturn would have won that unless Mako got a very, VERY lucky strike in and y'know...chopped her head off. Glad Rini figured out how to use the Silver Crystal of PWNAGE in time. It seems not even the lil'est Senshi of DEATH can stand against it's mighty shiny MIGHT of SHININESS. For a minute there I thought something bad was gonna happen to Sapphire but yeah, the sucking vortex of doom for Mako pipped him to the post. At least she'll have company with her ex-queenie. I'm not sure if that's a good thing or a bad thing but here's hoping for closure for 'em at least.

Darn your evil cliffhangers! Looking forward to more!
Sailor Ayame chapter 16 . 12/6/2012
Hotaru and Makoto's battle was amazing. I totally saw it. Great job!
Update soooon chapter 15 . 11/30/2012
Wooaa, please update and do not abandon this story!it is very cool and full of surprises, i will love to see it finished!
Please finish chapter 15 . 11/26/2012
Pleaaase don't leave this project alone, finish it, and if it is possible for you, make a cool sequel, this story is so complete and complex, that is even better than the original, LOL, please don't leave us fans without your cool writing!
Desperatereader chapter 15 . 11/20/2012
What a cool story you have here! Please update soon, i can't wit to know what happens next, and finish it really soon too, this is going to be a great hit!D
Happyreader chapter 15 . 11/17/2012
Heeey, this story is very good and interesting too! I will love to see it finished D please don't stop and go on, you write very cool!
GhostWriter73 chapter 15 . 11/10/2012

Yikes! Well, I certainly wasn't expecting Setsuna to pull the whole meeting her Destiny card. A lonely woman, eh? I'm suspecting Metalia's not the only one she was *really* describing there... Good ol' Pluto, enigmatic to the end.

I can't help feeling sorry for Asuka because she has truly, truly been Blessed with Suck as the next Guardian of the Timey Wimey Gate. At least she got a hug from Makoto. Awwww.

And yay for Rini *finally* getting her hands on that darn Crystal! Hopefully she'll use the thing in time before everyone including Jupiter also meets a date with their Destiny! GANBATTE RINI!

And I love this quote-

"To kill a Jovian, one need only time."

It would have made the perfect tagline for a promotional poster if this story was a movie. Heh!
Jovian Sun chapter 15 . 11/9/2012
Wow...sweet chapter! I don't think there was one paragraph bereft of action this time around! Glad the good guys are winning! (At least for nowl I still remember asuka's warning from a few chapters earlier.
this chapter was worth the wait and I hope the next one comes soon. I want to see Rini kick some major butt with the silver crystal!
GhostWriter73 chapter 14 . 10/31/2012
I love this whole new take on the Sailormoon Lore you've created. I find the Mythos of Jupiter and the Senshi concerning their Patron Gods and Power really intriguing! (Jove is so kickass!) You also write Makoto as a no nonsense bloodied Warrior which I've always felt she was. The nice thing is, I feel you don't compromise her character by doing so and despite her deadly violence, you can still see the caring kind hearted woman underneath the armour.

I'm still not sure about Metalia. It's clear she suffered a great wrong done to her but her methods are very suspect. Nice touch with Neph's mum and the reason why it truly sucks to be Shitennou.

And wow, those Silver Millennium Moon Queens will stop at almost nothing in the name of Peace! That Grandmother was pretty darn ruthless and woe betide anyone who harms a single hair on her daughter! Granny SILVER CRYSTAL SMASH!

Despite her obvious failings in this story, I'm hoping Usagi will eventually redeem herself. I don't believe she's as weak willed as she appears and has proven to stand strong in the face of overwhelming adversity in the Past. I don't expect her to save the day in her typical Mary Sue-ish Deus Ex Machina way, but it would be nice to see her get some closure concerning her daughter, the Sins of the Royal Moon Family, Metalia and Makoto.

Speaking of closure, it's really gonna bite for poor Makoto facing her old beloved comrades as enemies in the next chapter and that foreshadowing of her doomed future is killing me! Goodness knows how she's gonna win against Saturn. She's like the Senshi equivalent of the Death Star!

Great work and seriously looking forward to more!
Jovian Sun chapter 14 . 10/30/2012
Ok, so Neo-Queen Serenity's grandmother? I don't like her at all. It's sweet to see that Queen Serenity was so much like Usagi when she was younger. I do love hearing the villain state that Neo-Queen Serenity has always been week. (You've made it a truth at this point in the story!)
So, what's Makoto going to do? Try to save the others or kill them to protect what's left? I hope you update again soon so we can find out!
James Birdsong chapter 13 . 9/28/2012
Eclipse of Thunder chapter 12 . 9/19/2012
Fantastic! I am eager to know Metalia's past!
James Birdsong chapter 12 . 9/18/2012
Awesome story. Awesome twelve chapters
Jovian Sun chapter 12 . 9/18/2012
Whoa. So where is this "time play" (since she can watch but not intervene) going to go? At this point it feels like the turned senshi have just given up so are in an easier era. At least it feels that way with how they look and feel in this chapter. And the jovian- if it was Metallia's era as a senshi, wouldn't she be her grandmother? (possibly. maybe her mom.) I'm curious to know.
I feel a little sad too. This whole chapter has the feel of the beginning of the end. All stories have to come to an end though, ne?
**This is in no way my vote for it to end quickly. I've loved reading it and I look forward to a great ending eventually.**
I can't wait to read the next chapter!
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