|Reviews for Baby Sitting Kidvengers!|
| HoldTightAndPretendItIsAPlan chapter 16 . 7/25
Haha. Tony is cute and loki is adorable as ever!
Though I have to wonder how everyone will react when they are back to their older selves... and if they will remember anything? I kind of hope they don't and Harry just elects not to bring their memories back. Then Loki gets suspicious of the way Harry acts around him and does another spell to himself that makes him remember what happened while de-aged. End result? Only Harry, Loki, SHIELD and Teddy know and remember what happened while the Avengers were De-aged (and Loki and Harry frequently go out for drinks when they aren't fighting because bonding).
| Guest chapter 16 . 7/22
Love it plz plz plz plz plz plz write more xx
| NonchalantxFish chapter 16 . 7/17
awesome fic! it's so incredibly cute, but i'm glad to be seeing some action!
| Irena Devereau chapter 16 . 7/17
It's lovely and well written. My heart melted a few times.
| masculineangel chapter 16 . 7/9
Alright. Some constructive criticism:
What the hell was this?
I mean, actually! What the hell was this? I mean, damn!
Who in the living hell mashes together The Brave Little Toaster and The Legend of Korra? It's just a flagrant, irresponsible abuse of the first amendment. I feel nearly certain the founding fathers, who were pretty much all sketchy Freemasons, would derive negligible enjoyment from reading this. While it may be more attributed to mass confusion as to what a toaster is and what "bending" is, their lack of gratification after reading this story definitely is in direct response to your abysmal writing skills. Do you even proof read anything your chubby fingers smack into the little white text box from that cheeto-encrusted, twelve-year-old keyboard? Take some damn responsibility for your brazen lack of care or respect toward your readers, buckle up your damn pants, put on some deodorant, and do better!
I'm tired of the crap you put out for us to read! Alright, I've followed you since 2008, and I feel entitled to better fan fiction crossovers, dammit. I would have forgiven placing something as sacred as The Brave Little Toaster with something worthwhile, like the Peanuts or Stuart Little, or even The Land Before Time, but the insidiously atrocious Legend of Korra? Screw that. It was bad enough, but after eight years of writing mediocre fan fiction, you would think you would finally be able to understand and apply the differences between the words "is," "are," and "am." Think of the children you masochistic, probably misogynistic, freak!
The story itself was unacceptable. The Brave Little Toaster is no warrior where he is from, so it's not fair for him to be placed in a fight to the literal death with the main villain cop out of Season Two of The Legend of Korra. Why are you still writing about season two anyway? Didn't season four end in, like, 2014? What the hell? Not only did you take an absolutely abhorrent show, you took the absolute worst part of it. Like, how on Zeus's good Gaia did you expect to write a worthwhile story surrounding a battle between the Brave Little Toaster and fucking Unalaq? You can't. I mean you specifically. I'm sure someone out there could do the Brave Little Toaster justice. Also, you only took Toaster over from his universe?! Why didn't you bring the others? Compared to Kirby the vacuum cleaner and Lampy the lamp, the Toaster is only an "OK" character. I mean, damn, mate! Try to adulterate a beloved childhood series further, why don't you, you piece of apricot colored tortoise dung! I suppose I should applaud you for not including any aspect of the sequel movies, though. Those things are like shoe bombs in a porta potty. Almost as bad as The Shining. Damn. That took me back...
Anyway, I give this sorry excuse for a story a 1.3 out of 10. It had very little promise to begin with and you way, way, way under delivered. Good fucking job, you ten gallon hat of a Jamaican brontosaurus. Spike would be ashamed of your sorry display. So would Stalin, probably. Damn.
| Guest chapter 16 . 7/7
More pleeeeeeeeeeeeeeeease xxx
| Kitty Mizu chapter 16 . 7/5
Oooh! I can't wait to see what happens!
| Kumaboy chapter 16 . 7/3
Thanks for updating!
loved the chapter :)
| moonlitreader chapter 16 . 7/2
I love this!
| nikkali44 chapter 16 . 6/30
I'm glad you updated, I can't wait to see what will come next and how Harry will get back Tony and Loki
| Chise Sakamoto chapter 16 . 6/28
Nice! I hope their new personlaties carry!
| Guest chapter 16 . 6/23
More now please xxxxxx
| fierynightangel chapter 16 . 6/25
Very awesome chapter! Very well done! Looking forward to more!
| Guest chapter 1 . 6/23
Loving it I am on first chapter. You have to finish this so good XX
| Guest chapter 3 . 6/22
So cute, my heart just melted ;)