|Reviews for The Stare That Started It All|
| natasha chapter 5 . 5/26/2014
I love this story cant wait to read more
| RKF22 chapter 5 . 3/24/2014
Great story so far keep up the great work
| JasonVUK chapter 5 . 3/11/2014
It's good to hear you got over writer's block that can be a bitch I know that much.
:-) A nice chapter. I'm looking forward to where you'll be taking it :D
| JasonVUK chapter 4 . 3/11/2014
:o Hmm. Not bad. :I I would like slightly larger chapters though be able to be puled into the world more. But I like it regardless.
| JasonVUK chapter 3 . 3/11/2014
:O Wow! That's quite a bit in such a short chapter. :o It's good.
Again need better punctuation :I separate lines and the like 8D but good
| JasonVUK chapter 2 . 3/11/2014
Well, another good chapter. :-) Though your punctuation could do with improving. Separate lines for different speakers and the like. _ but good. :-)
| JasonVUK chapter 1 . 3/11/2014
:o Oohh first chapter, short, simple and puts the question out there :3 Not bad.
| rnbm chapter 4 . 9/15/2012
I liked the Chapter. The last sentence was a little supprising. Almost like Sarah was accepting, or was she?
| jamie chapter 4 . 9/10/2012
can't wait to read more of this. :D
| lee chapter 4 . 9/4/2012
| RKF22 chapter 4 . 9/5/2012
yes!well done loving it cant wait fore more
| TheWizardofOzbourne chapter 4 . 9/4/2012
This story is good, please continue it.
| lithiummessiah chapter 4 . 9/4/2012
| justjoe chapter 4 . 9/4/2012
I'm not sure what the point of this story is. From what has been written, this could have been a simple one shot of an evening at home, or something to that effect. Why write a multi-chapter piece based on a simple romantic interlude?
| olischulu chapter 4 . 9/4/2012
Very nice story but this wasn't a new chapter. Only a repetition of the last from differenz POVs but repetitions regardless.
Only the last few sentences were new.
I want more