Reviews for The Stare That Started It All
natasha chapter 5 . 5/26/2014
I love this story cant wait to read more
RKF22 chapter 5 . 3/24/2014
Great story so far keep up the great work
JasonVUK chapter 5 . 3/11/2014
It's good to hear you got over writer's block that can be a bitch I know that much.

:-) A nice chapter. I'm looking forward to where you'll be taking it :D
JasonVUK chapter 4 . 3/11/2014
:o Hmm. Not bad. :I I would like slightly larger chapters though be able to be puled into the world more. But I like it regardless.
JasonVUK chapter 3 . 3/11/2014
:O Wow! That's quite a bit in such a short chapter. :o It's good.

Again need better punctuation :I separate lines and the like 8D but good
JasonVUK chapter 2 . 3/11/2014
Well, another good chapter. :-) Though your punctuation could do with improving. Separate lines for different speakers and the like. _ but good. :-)
JasonVUK chapter 1 . 3/11/2014
:o Oohh first chapter, short, simple and puts the question out there :3 Not bad.
rnbm chapter 4 . 9/15/2012
I liked the Chapter. The last sentence was a little supprising. Almost like Sarah was accepting, or was she?
jamie chapter 4 . 9/10/2012
can't wait to read more of this. :D
lee chapter 4 . 9/4/2012
RKF22 chapter 4 . 9/5/2012
yes!well done loving it cant wait fore more
TheWizardofOzbourne chapter 4 . 9/4/2012
This story is good, please continue it.
lithiummessiah chapter 4 . 9/4/2012
Very cool.
justjoe chapter 4 . 9/4/2012
I'm not sure what the point of this story is. From what has been written, this could have been a simple one shot of an evening at home, or something to that effect. Why write a multi-chapter piece based on a simple romantic interlude?
olischulu chapter 4 . 9/4/2012
Very nice story but this wasn't a new chapter. Only a repetition of the last from differenz POVs but repetitions regardless.

Only the last few sentences were new.

I want more
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