Reviews for The Mess I Made
hanna chapter 1 . 10/17/2016
This was amazingly written...
I loved the angst in that beautiful scene...
Thank you for writing!
sandyba chapter 1 . 7/24/2016
Excellent job!
Thank you for sad but real and very touching!
I liked your writing style,it's clear and vivid.
Keep writing of Jack and Kate,you're good:)
alex chapter 1 . 7/24/2016
Excellent job! I can feel the desperation,the loneliness and hopeless pain of Jack...
Thank you!
Keep writing ;)
Guest chapter 1 . 5/24/2016
Angst and love. So tragic and intense. So Jate.
I feel for Jack,he' so broken and torn.
But they' re in love so much.
ems023 chapter 1 . 6/14/2012
Niiiiice Job! I really liked that. That scene in the show was so pivotal in getting the audience to see Jack's despair and decline. You can really get a sense of their mutual agony.