Reviews for Kill the Rabbit
silverwolf1249 chapter 53 . 6/11
I hope you post new stories soon! I really liked this fic (this is the third time I've reread it) and I'm very curious on Gas the Warren and Sing! I also briefly remember reading a fic where Thatch and Ace were captured by Teach and this is Marco x Ace. I remember that after they're captured Teach tortures Thatch by pulling out his fingernails, and Ace sees Hatter. Throughout the fic is mentions of Wonderland and the such, and I was wondering if you know what the fic is? Because I know you probably didn't write it (or if you did you deleted it). Anyways, besides that, I know it's been a long time since you've posted and I hope you're still continuing to write? Also, I read in one of your author notes that your sister also writes? Since I couldn't find it, what's her pen name? I'd like to check out her fics too. Thank you for writing this story! It was very dark but so intriguing at the same time.
levysbookshelf chapter 53 . 5/31
I'm not going to lie I thought Cheshire was going to be Mr. Savage. Poor Marco it wasn't his fault really but I guess that doesn't change anything. I think he needs a hug.
Guest chapter 53 . 5/31
This was so fucked up but it was great!
Flowerbelle chapter 53 . 2/23
This is the only fanfic I have ever cried for
FirePhoenixAce chapter 40 . 12/3/2016
So... first marco is getting cut of from the group...
He finds the hatter, and is torn to shreds and almost dies..
He heals himself, but manage to get hurt again...
Then, he is jumped from behind, drugged, and dragged off...

Marco is NOT doing great...
Lifepaw chapter 53 . 11/18/2016
What a journey! Most thrilling and entertaining fanfiction of all time! I was completely hooked all the way as I read it from start to finish! I initially did read part of this fanfiction a while ago, but ended up forgetting about til recently when I rediscovered my love for One Piece. Towards the end, maybe around chapter 50, I got super sad to know that this epic rollercoaster of a ride was almost over and I kind of put it off to a hold until my curiosity begged me to know what happens next. I am completely at lost of words on how well you wrote the entire story, the creativity, the imagination, and the freaking logic behind everything to the point you actually almost broke my mind (twice) and made me question the entire universe (The Big Ban theory, how life works, the freaking atoms and molecules, the works) when you explained "Nothing is true, everything is permitted" and the ending completely blew me away! This story is pure genius! The personalities of all the characters were wonderful as well! I plan on reading all the books you mentioned to get a peek at what you might have possibly thought of when you wrote this story. I'm also hoping you'll one day upload the rest of your work and bring back the enchanting story back to life because I'm extremely curious to know whether or not Luffy will find out all about this, but considering what Ace said I don't think it's possible.
Guest chapter 22 . 11/8/2016
Did sabo skip two because he was now part of two little crabs? MY GOD this is beautiful
Frostfire613 chapter 12 . 10/5/2016
There is no such thing as a "rare form of PTSD", it's a mental illness that manifests in many different ways. As for a cure? There is no technical cure for PTSD. It's not something that you can just take a drug for and it goes away. PTSD, depending on the severity, requires therapy to help elevate. Even then, it never truly goes away.
Guest chapter 1 . 9/29/2016
My second time reading this fic and I still love it it has to be the best op story I've read so far:)I love how u did ace's character and love the goth wonderland...but poor sabo it sucks he had to die:( but anyway I freaking LOVE this story now excuse me while I read it a third time
first chapter 2 . 9/28/2016
Ace isn't smart enough to know how to make a door blend, literally. Second, the serpent talking cat thing just threw me off; I honestly wouldn't care if she's from Zou which I really do believe she isn't, seeing as she almost resembles a cats' figure excluding the faces she makes, which are nearly impossible for any cat to try to do.

Second, other then the cringe and blanch for having the cat be a main character in this story; her speech makes me think she isn't even from OP world. "Bitch, please." Sure, someone would say that in One Piece, I really am sure. I don't mind you using vulgar language, I like to see that in One Piece, just not overly retarded westernised statements like that, a huge turn off for anyone read this story. (me, by that.)

I don't think I'll continue, I hope you read this soon and get this message.
Anon chapter 7 . 8/22/2016
I love this story so much!
3D.2why chapter 1 . 8/8/2016
bruh, I'm on chapter 14 and i'm so into this story
NikeScaret chapter 29 . 5/29/2016
I am on chapter 29, but my god this is terrifying and awesome. The way you write it is I have no words. How can you write this GOOD?! I don't think I can compare. I applaud you. WELL DONE! And now I'll go back to reading... *hums happily*
anaisonfire chapter 53 . 5/12/2016
Ooohhhkaaaayyy... First of all, let me say this - this story is a mindfuck and a half! Since the beginning, since the very beginning, I was trying to solve the mystery of what the actual fuck was going on. I came close. I came so damn close. I saw some things coming - consciously or not - and others didn't even cross my mind as a stray thought. As more and more of Wonderland was revealed my brain went full-on analytical-mode. Long story short, I ended up being awake at 5am reading this and contemplating existence, mortality, reality, 'mind', 'self' etc., even though later I had to run 300 meters or I wouldn't graduate (I slayed it, btw; turns out, sleep isn't that important). As I'm writing this, my maths teacher is going on and on about the Pythagorean theorem and I should probably pay attention but your story is too awesome for me to care right now and I wanna finish this review before I forget how I feel about it. How do I feel? Well, like I said, this is a mindfuck and a half, so it feels like someone deep-fried my brain cells and then lat me wander around Wonderland.
I love your writing style, it's detailed and interesting and makes me wanna read more and more. I love that ending because it seems very fitting even though the other one you put in this not-chapter is equally so. Basically, my mind is blown as to how you came up with all of this. This was a really wild ride that I'm glad I got onto. Thank you for writing this. Even though, I probably won't read the sequel... Or if I do, it certainly won't be right away. My brain has had enough psychological horror and mind games for a while, thank you very much. I'll probably come back to read it when I run out of things to read, which happens way too often...
Anyway, that's all I wanted to say. This got quite lengthy, I think.
Ana, Out
anaisonfire chapter 21 . 5/11/2016
Oooh look. Psychological torture. Just when you think you can't possibly hate someone any more and then it gets thrown into the mix! Hahaha... Ha... Haa... ...
*Please excuse is, we seem to be experiencing technical problems. We will return once Ana has stopped imagining the 1001 ways she could make Hare DIE*
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