Reviews for Fate's Whipping Boy
domsijohn chapter 13 . 9/6/2012
i hope in pray that you finish this story i love viktor harry pairing there's not enough of them in the ones that are out never get finish are updated i was afraid that you wouldn't update but love it want more in hope for mpreg love the partners that are paired up i also hope they stay together in get married nev with sasha mio with gergori harry with viktor tonks with remus and sev with sirius would also like to see bella dis owned from the family anyway i kind of want ginny to be check out by doctor's in ron to be like nev was kind of a friend but not close until the end and lots of babies looking forward to a update soon
domsijohn chapter 12 . 9/6/2012
so good like that your keeping it to a some what canon want more
domsijohn chapter 11 . 9/6/2012
ginny's sick
domsijohn chapter 10 . 9/6/2012
loving the pairing i so don't want harry to forgive ron are be friends with him
domsijohn chapter 9 . 9/6/2012
yeah vic get's a kiss
domsijohn chapter 8 . 9/6/2012
dame love this harry rocks
domsijohn chapter 7 . 9/6/2012
they so need to go to gringotts in albus should die
domsijohn chapter 6 . 9/6/2012
so good want more
domsijohn chapter 5 . 9/6/2012
so like this this is the way harry should have went
domsijohn chapter 4 . 9/6/2012
i so hope harry's friends can help him
domsijohn chapter 3 . 9/6/2012
but at least they know want more
domsijohn chapter 2 . 9/6/2012
i kind of love harry with long hair want more
domsijohn chapter 1 . 9/6/2012
poor harry i hope viktor helps him
Loki Firefox chapter 4 . 8/31/2012
Nope sorry, no way. This chapter implies that all Potter had to do was reveal a little of his messed-up for Draco and Snape to treat him like they should have from the beginning.

Draco is a prat. Pretty much every fight he's had with Harry he provoked. He's a bully, a hypocrite and a coward. He only fights Harry when he's in a position of strength, or thinks he is. He doesn't even have the smarts to realize when he's lost the advantage. So why should Harry be the one to make peace? Draco's nothing but antagonistic all because Harry chose Ron over him, that's really mature. Not all that subtle either. And instead of trying to win Harry over he chooses to whine about it instead.

And Snape. No matter what Harry's parents (and their friends) did to him, it no way excuses his behavior to Harry. So if Harry WAS raised as a pampered prince, that means Snape's actions were justified? Harry hadn't even opened his mouth yet and Snape was on his case already.

This would be different if the history in your fic was different than in canon, but this follows canon so that means everything that has gone on before happened in your fic. In that case, neither Snape nor Draco warrants Harry's respect. He has to do something about them, that's for sure but pandering to them? That's a bitter pill to swallow.

Also, after Hermione biting everyone's heads off last chapter about delving into Harry's past, he basically just gives it up this chapter. That's pretty contradictory.
1withthepotionsseveroussnape chapter 11 . 8/28/2012
You misspelled the british term, Cor in this chapter. Instead you spelled it Gor. just thought i should point that out. I still love this fic.
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