Reviews for The New Girl
Guest chapter 3 . 11/9/2012
owww more please! loving it
Guest chapter 2 . 11/9/2012
awesome you are talented and beautiful-
jasmine chapter 2 . 10/3/2012
great i would do it to make me felt better i wouldnot like it but i would do it still
Egyptiandude990 chapter 1 . 8/20/2012
Okay in the first chapter, they are way too perky it's freaking me out! But I still like it.
MUM chapter 2 . 8/6/2012
Well beautiful talented daughter you have done it again- please write the next chapter- I want to know what happens next- get to the computer and punch those keys ! LOLLOL LOL LOL
Templar chapter 1 . 6/10/2012
Really enjoyed the story can not wait for next chapter well done Bethany love Dad so proud of you so good i read it to the twins and they loved it to xxx
Allie chapter 1 . 6/7/2012
Oh my goodness girl that's awesome! Can't wait for the next chapter!
MommaBear95 chapter 1 . 6/7/2012
Hey this is the first time i have heard about this fanfiction page and i have been so very impressed with the quality of stories- this particular one shows great promise and i can't wait for the next bit as we have been left on a cliff hanger. i love the attention to detail in the description and clearly this is a young writer in the making- please write more
ashash1996800 chapter 1 . 6/7/2012
ok people this is my best friend if u have nothing nice to say then dont review! girl i love this story so far very very good!

like any person who reviews:"please update soon!"