|Reviews for 1st Annual Hunger Games|
| HoppsHungerfan chapter 9 . 4/13
Chase is my least favorite character in this fanfiction. He had no reason to volunteer, did so anyway-his District partner wound up falling in love with him, he abandons his alliance and makes it to 9TH place at the expense of great characters- Kadence, Loki, Itzel, Jackal, Poseidon, Tess.
He came from a terrible home, such a terrible home, yet in the chariot rides he is described as having a 'toned' body with good looks. He is the very definition of a Marty Stu, and a terrible character. He gets instant popularity after being malnourished and changing himself
WHAT THE HELL?!
| HoppsHungerfan chapter 3 . 3/2
Neutral: Loki, Micah, Araluen, Mercy
At this point in the story I considered Araluen to be one of the stronger competitors, but Loki seemed to be the strongest of them all. Araluen is similar to Loki in that he has a lot to return to in spite of having been through the rebellion
But I liked Micah because I really disliked Janice as well. She does lose realism points for volunteering for the annual hunger games without knowing about anything-which is my first major criticism:
There is no build up, all of these things that we see in hunger games 74 are presented in hunger games 1, when there would have had to have been build up. Training for the games, volunteering, it seems quite a bit rushed
| HoppsHungerfan chapter 2 . 3/2
I don't know if you still read your reviews on this, but I'm just leaving this note right here
Neutral: Loki, Mercy
Loki Braveheart, sounds like a marty stu. He's strong, good looking, and a actually a nice-ish guy. He is who I rooted for the most when it came down to the careers, he was strong, but had a lot to return to
Mercy Breen, sounded like a bitch. I didn't really like her, I didn't care much for her. And really, she kind of pales in development compared to Loki
| HoppsHungerfan chapter 1 . 3/2
Okay, I just want to say, I always come back to this fanfiction when I need a good read
This is the story that sent me to fanfiction in the first place, and despite its flaws, It's an inheritently good story, and I like the heart it has
| SilenceWillFall73 chapter 22 . 7/26/2016
Great story well done
I'm so glad that Aria won, she was one of my favourites
Was sad when lili and Ashley died though
| Jasmine chapter 19 . 7/7/2016
This story is great! I really wanted a story about the 1st hunger games and I never thought to try fanfic, but so glad I did because otherwise I wouldn't have come across brilliant stories like this one! :)
| The Mediocre Papyrus chapter 2 . 1/7/2015
"Loki Braveheart". Really?
| iluviggyhesthebest chapter 55 . 12/30/2014
:( I WANTED IT TO BE SAVANNA! I liked Aria too, but... Savanna was awesome, and District 10 winning the first Hunger Games would be epic, not to mention the fact that Aria is OP.
| iluviggyhesthebest chapter 42 . 12/30/2014
WHY ARE ALL THE COUPLES DYING?! :(
JAZZY! LOKI! You will be avenged!
| Evan-Gray chapter 50 . 12/29/2014
I almost cried when Kyran died. Is that weird?
| Evan-Gray chapter 36 . 12/27/2014
Am I the only one who likes Lili?
| Evan-Gray chapter 32 . 12/26/2014
Could it be a sequel?! And for an SYOT, would you only using the authors of this story? If not, I would love to submit a tribute!
| Emma chapter 5 . 7/5/2014
ooooo! I hope the D.4 tributes get together!
| Guest chapter 30 . 1/31/2014
i was extremely pissed with tess death so early, but great story
| Guest chapter 52 . 1/20/2014
luka is a freaking beast btw! Awesome job creating his character