|Reviews for Dark family|
| Azael-Ruthven chapter 18 . 10/25
Snape must have been even more broken. To fond out that Lily is still alive and to see her with Potter. Well, loads of memories must have rushed back up. But beside that, it is a great story. Potter Sr is the character I hate the most so I will not say anything about him
| Crimzon Beauty chapter 1 . 10/22
i cried to be honest 0.0...
how did harry get to Voldemort? did he have snape take him or something?
| Guest chapter 18 . 9/27
You made a few spelling mistakes:
| scarlettmeadows chapter 1 . 9/26
cringing and laughing [with enjoyment] at the same time :D
| Tigersaga chapter 18 . 9/22
I loved your story, but I can't help but point out in several places, you use 'was' instead of 'were'. Just a little mistake, I make those all the time but I just thought I'd let you know :)
| Tigersaga chapter 2 . 9/22
Haha, spoke too soon
| Tigersaga chapter 1 . 9/22
Oh my god, I know about that story, I just can't think of it...was I something like The Dragon Prince?
| Guest chapter 1 . 7/24
I know exactly what story you are talking about! Its called something like "Dark Roses" is this it?
Um maybe not, but I'm not sure, I didn't read this one. But it includes a tattoo..and a gang of dark heirs. I'm on a mission to find this story now
| Stasia Ravenclaw chapter 18 . 7/24
| Stacey's Universe chapter 2 . 6/20
simple words as well... instead of was it should be a 'were' or 'is'.
Some sentences are boring with no description either
| Stacey's Universe chapter 1 . 6/20
have read half way through the story and really enjoying it
but am feeling frustrated at the spelling goofs
for one, it's SHOCK not chock
there are a few others but can't recall where I spotted them in the first place
it feels very rushed, like you wanted to complete it in a certain time
| Raven Salazar Potter-Black chapter 1 . 6/18
I think that that story is the Dark Rose or the Dark Roses, it's on my favourites list.
| MysticFireBlood chapter 18 . 6/1
It felt rushed. I read it to the end, but it has potential to a great story if you were to take time and write it out more and fix your grammar and spelling mistakes. There are a lot of holes in this story that should have been fixed.
| GleekForLife21 chapter 7 . 5/31
| kirsty21 chapter 18 . 5/30