|Reviews for Dark family|
| Guest chapter 18 . 9/27
You made a few spelling mistakes:
| scarlettmeadows chapter 1 . 9/26
cringing and laughing [with enjoyment] at the same time :D
| Tigersaga chapter 18 . 9/22
I loved your story, but I can't help but point out in several places, you use 'was' instead of 'were'. Just a little mistake, I make those all the time but I just thought I'd let you know :)
| Tigersaga chapter 2 . 9/22
Haha, spoke too soon
| Tigersaga chapter 1 . 9/22
Oh my god, I know about that story, I just can't think of it...was I something like The Dragon Prince?
| Guest chapter 1 . 7/24
I know exactly what story you are talking about! Its called something like "Dark Roses" is this it?
Um maybe not, but I'm not sure, I didn't read this one. But it includes a tattoo..and a gang of dark heirs. I'm on a mission to find this story now
| Stasia Ravenclaw chapter 18 . 7/24
| Stacey's Universe chapter 2 . 6/20
simple words as well... instead of was it should be a 'were' or 'is'.
Some sentences are boring with no description either
| Stacey's Universe chapter 1 . 6/20
have read half way through the story and really enjoying it
but am feeling frustrated at the spelling goofs
for one, it's SHOCK not chock
there are a few others but can't recall where I spotted them in the first place
it feels very rushed, like you wanted to complete it in a certain time
| Raven Salazar Potter-Black chapter 1 . 6/18
I think that that story is the Dark Rose or the Dark Roses, it's on my favourites list.
| MysticFireBlood chapter 18 . 6/1
It felt rushed. I read it to the end, but it has potential to a great story if you were to take time and write it out more and fix your grammar and spelling mistakes. There are a lot of holes in this story that should have been fixed.
| GleekForLife21 chapter 7 . 5/31
| kirsty21 chapter 18 . 5/30
| OrphanAnnie1166 chapter 18 . 5/23
I recently found your story and I loved it.
| Lyca1990 chapter 18 . 5/22
Bad narrative, bad grammar but a lot of potential for a good story.
really needs a native speaker to Beta it.