|Reviews for The Rise of a Dark Lord|
| Mika chapter 22 . 4/25/2020
My lovely author, I knew what I was getting into when I saw that this story hasn't been updated in 5 years. But no amount of preparation can help with the frustration that follows reading an unfinished story. I love this story and love the beautiful characterization. If you ever decide to return and complete this masterpiece, I'll be delighted. Kudos to you dear author:)
| Coolfire30 chapter 22 . 4/21/2020
hehehe...heheh...I'm positively manic! at what the future holds for Harry and Tom's ideals!
But... with a shuddering exhale...I am once again faced with the immovable force-or should I say entity? That is Little Miss Xanda's muse... Ahhh...the feeling of defeat and longing washes over me as I reread their little tryst at the end...knowing that it isn't a far gone conclusion that this story has little hope of receiving and update... after all...half a decade is a long time of inactivity...
Though I am resigned to wait... however long that takes, and however much I'll have to reread the entirety of this story once again... in hopes of a continuation...
Regardless...I must express my joy and appreciation for your peculiar mind that thought up this plot...thank you... for sharing...
| Coolfire30 chapter 20 . 4/21/2020
This Push and Pull... This Back and Forth... between both Lords...it just edges me closer to depravity! And I couldn't be more pleased!
| Coolfire30 chapter 19 . 4/21/2020
I had... trouble... breathing...hmm...
I actually think I may somehow be asthmatic!
It seems, however, that my hopes and dreams of past chapters have been realized! And I could not be any happier!
OH...~ How I would write more but... the next chapter calls to me, something akin to a siren luring a sailor to the deep deep blue, and eventually... Their death... though for me it's more like feeding the obssession... and pulling my mind into darker depths.
Forgive the... horrible... what is it? Analogy? ...I'm half resigned that after more than a week of no less than 3 or so hours of sleep, -give or take a few,I'm treading between a very thin line of just FAINTING, or going somewhat insane.
| Coolfire30 chapter 17 . 4/21/2020
It must be redundant now... my reactions that is... still... Tom...or should I say Nacht? I was ecstatic during their whole exchanges of letters, and Harry's... dream... along with Tom's reactions... but... It's almost heart breaking what's happened... though I cannot deny the thrill of what COULD be...I still hope in future chapters that that wish will be realized...in one form or any others really...I'm... hmm... quite... desperate now...
| Coolfire30 chapter 16 . 4/21/2020
Oh~... dear Lord... you are.. TORTURING ME! This-This exchange of wit and wisdom! This banter! between Tom and Harry! Their... ugh gods~... Their chemistry!~ IS making me shiver in anticipation! I am almost in euphoria when I try to conjure up scenarios of their... hmm... joining? of their connect? Perhaps... their... merging?
I'm giggling and blushing at the thought!
oh gods I'm a horrible person...
| Coolfire30 chapter 15 . 4/21/2020
It's quite... difficult... for me to put a lid on my...rather disconcerting predisposition to laugh or giggle when my sadistic and dark tendencies are ... aroused...
It should also be noted that with growing distress of the current...final chapter...which is coming closer and closer than ever...I have been rereading...certain parts-paragraphs-or any scenes whatsoever that show Harry's proclivities for the dark, and any show of his power... which to be truthful... is nearly whole chapters...
| Coolfire30 chapter 14 . 4/21/2020
I really doubt that you understand the full extent of my obsession with Tom... and in extension...the capacity in which my emotions will rage inside me with a concerning fervor when he is mentioned, and the way you portray him...*moans* nor do I think you understand that having Harry and Tom interact with each other like that... you know what I mean... makes me act like a prepubescent child with a piece of candy being waved in front of me! It's madness! Utter madness I tell you!
I'm becoming obsessed... and that is not good...hmm...no not good at all... after all... there is little hope of your return to this particular story... and I think I might cry just at the thought of this story becoming abandoned!-if not already being abandoned!... Ahhh the despair I feel...
| Coolfire30 chapter 13 . 4/21/2020
Tom stating that Harry was such a tease... nearly broke me.
Can you imagine...someone throwing their phone at the ground and laughing hysterically? Because that just happened... to me... and now my phone is sporting several cracks... and I can't even muster up any feelings other than amusement!
Ughmmn... and need I say more about Harry straddling Tom?! OH GOD I THINK I HAD A MINOR ANEURYSM! I WAS CHOKING IN ANTICIPATION AND WAS SO UTTERLY ENRAPTURED THAT I NEARLY FORGOT HOW TO BREATHE! It was such a bewitching moment that I wished there was more... and by gods I actually fucking ship them now... ugh yummy...
| Coolfire30 chapter 11 . 4/21/2020
Let's just admit it...I for one, have been...pacing... rather... aggressively... and...panting... or should I say, gasping for air? I have no idea whether I was having some sort of freak melt down or just hyperventilating in general however... the idea...hmm.. no... the mere thought of Harry having such a disposition...such confidence and aura! ngghhh...I'm all but moaning in ecstasy! Add that onto the fact that Tom is... or dare I say... actively showing interest in him this early on... ugh, just yes please and thank you!
| Coolfire30 chapter 8 . 4/21/2020
The fact that you've written his court members with the likeness of a puppy or some sort of canine species-what with the eagerness to please, and the tail wagging...I've been giggling...actually giggling throughout this whole chapter and previous chapters...I dare say that as of the moment, this particular chapter may be...my favourite...
And his...hmm... actions... so to speak, in Diagon Alley... that man who was... nothing... ahhh...truly a delight to read!
Another thing! I've always had a certain...appreciation...hmmm no...more like...love-bordering on an obsession... towards the Malfoy's... them and Tom of course... and by gods! I was practically SHAKING in delight at how you've portrayed their... somewhat delicate...character!
I would gush more but I really wish to read to more!
| Coolfire30 chapter 7 . 4/21/2020
...I'm all but FAINTING right now! It's absolutely ridiculous how much I'm enjoying ... EVERYTHING! His thought process! His actions! ...I mean...need I say more?!
| Coolfire30 chapter 5 . 4/21/2020
I'm positively quivering!...in delight of course... ahh... Harry is BY FAR exceeding my preconceptions of what his personality would be... ahh...I think I might fall in love...
| Coolfire30 chapter 1 . 4/21/2020
I'm SCREAMING in excitement! I just '...loveDark!Harry fanfics! And I'm sure, that this particular one will be one of my favourites!
| Daenyris chapter 1 . 4/20/2020
I have to say that this is one of the best story's that I've ever read. You make us believe in everything that happens, the characters are delightfully evil, and all I want as a reader is Harry and Tom to succeed and read more and more about them.
I hope one day you'll give our mind peace with an ending.