|Reviews for Emily|
| Edhla chapter 1 . 12/12/2012
This is a great fic and a pleasure to read, and it's a shame that nobody has gotten round to reviewing it yet. Your writing is confident and sophisticated and your dialogue sounds natural without being annoying. I like your characterisations, especially your narrator who has a very engaging voice.
I thought perhaps in places it was a bit too dialogue-heavy, but apart from the imbalance, what you actually have written is excellent. Welld one. :)