|Reviews for Next Stop Everywhere|
| theLastTimeLady chapter 1 . 8/14/2012
That is amazing! I love it! Five stars!
| Skoellya Seyth chapter 1 . 8/11/2012
I like the distinct tone in this; the descriptions are thoughtful, relevant and aware of character. My advice is, however, to be aware of your formatting. One big chunky paragraph is not easy on the eye, especially on a website. It's also quite neat how changing the paragraphing can affect a tone.
Like putting this sentence here.
The above line stand out because it is separate from the paragraph above and below. Reading has a visual element as well as an imaginative one!
Also, remember the cardinal reasons for using new paragraphs: Change of subject, place or time. What the companions feel and what the Doctor feels are two subjects (the point of view has shifted) so they should be separated by a line.
Need any other help pm me or leave another message with the Order of the Jabberwocky ;)
| JaneScarlett chapter 1 . 7/18/2012
ohhh... brilliant and so sad but really, really good!
'He is not just a mad man with a box, but also a lonely mad man with a box, one that is only complete when he's with other people.'
what a great description of him...
| fancythat23675 chapter 1 . 6/26/2012
I love this. Only one review? It deserved over a million.
Can't tell you how moved I was by this.
Job well done.
| ComeAlongPonds chapter 1 . 6/26/2012
Ooh! This is actually a great idea, and your writing is beautiful!