|Reviews for Restraint|
| AutumnVampire chapter 10 . 3/2/2013
good story so far plz uipdate
| twilightnaley19 chapter 10 . 12/8/2012
| twilightnaley19 chapter 9 . 12/8/2012
They were made for one another.
| twilightnaley19 chapter 8 . 12/8/2012
Totally thought his dad was really dead
| twilightnaley19 chapter 7 . 12/8/2012
| twilightnaley19 chapter 6 . 12/8/2012
| meg13-13 chapter 10 . 11/26/2012
| cullen sandra chapter 10 . 9/30/2012
I enjoyed your little twisted fic, :). I have just a few questions, as i have never seen the movie, i don't know much about the story line. First question: " did edward only play that he had a phobia of the outside, and being all shy? Was that just so nobody would question him about her being gone?
2.: "what pill did edward give bella?
3.: "why did he kill his gf? It can't be just because she was a gold digger?!
4.: edward said that he understood jasper now, after hearing about alice! What did he mean by that?
| cullen sandra chapter 8 . 9/30/2012
2 dead bodies? How come she did not question that statement.
| Kikabrona chapter 10 . 9/27/2012
| lebells1 chapter 10 . 8/23/2012
Dark, twisted brilliance.
Ripped out, mind-boggling. One of a kind.
If the movie is even half of what this is, I'm not surprised. Your's surpass it in all other ways.
90 mins- the epitome of mindfck and dark telling. And, the epilogue was an extension of your genuine creativity, mixed w/ dark and badassary.
Danger. Thrill. Restraint.
| rizzyg2 chapter 10 . 7/22/2012
OH MY GOOD LORD
That was so so so so so good! Seriously, you have the best imagination ever- I enjoyed that from the very start to the very finish! I loved the twist with Alice, having her decapitated and all, it was brilliant and 100% unexpected XD
Okay, down to the nitty gritty: there could have been more back story as to why Edward couldn't leave the house, and his overcoming that could have been done with more detail and hardship I think; but that's the only thing I'd fault about the whole story. It's clever, fast-paced, and kept me captivated all the way through- I'm actually glad that I didn't have to read it chapter at a time, but rather got to read the whole thing start to finish, all in one go, because I know that the anticipation of what would happen next would have kept me on tenterhooks for hours.
I'm not sure I quite deserve credit for betaing that I didn't manage to do (damn exams/holiday), but I can sure as hell tell you that it's bloody amazing now!
Finally, I think the epilogue is a stroke of genius- I love the twist on twilight, it's just fantastic. Brilliant use of the material, brilliant plot twists, just overall brilliance, yet again ;) 3 xxxx
| E's My Brand Of Heroin chapter 10 . 7/22/2012
I hate when people get to the end of my story and then review but I couldn't stop reading. Loved it! I've never seen the movie but it reminded me of something that Alfred Hitchcock would do. Very old school and intriguing without being gory or overly disturbing. Beautifully completed. I don't know how you don't have more reviews. I will try to change that!
| MizzVicki chapter 9 . 7/14/2012
i had felt that he must have killed her
| Orchid Child chapter 10 . 7/14/2012
This was amazing, great!
I loved this ending and the epi, Bella stayed true to herself yet still grew as a person, she became stronger and learned to be independent. I loved how Edward and Bella's relationship grew into something good. And this end with her ready to fuck up minds - just brilliant.
I will miss reading update on this, but it's great where it ended.