Reviews for Restraint
Guest chapter 1 . 8/1/2014
Rough start!
Agonidzo777 chapter 10 . 7/25/2014
This was a very good drama. I love the weakling part Edward played with Bella. I guessed that Marie was dead in the beginning and that Edward wanted Bella to replace her once he met and got to know Bella. Awesome!
ajendas chapter 10 . 7/20/2014
Fantastic story and very well written!
AutumnVampire chapter 10 . 3/2/2013
good story so far plz uipdate
twilightnaley19 chapter 10 . 12/8/2012
Great story.
twilightnaley19 chapter 9 . 12/8/2012
They were made for one another.
twilightnaley19 chapter 8 . 12/8/2012
Totally thought his dad was really dead
twilightnaley19 chapter 7 . 12/8/2012
twilightnaley19 chapter 6 . 12/8/2012
Great chapter
meg13-13 chapter 10 . 11/26/2012
Absolutely Magnificent!
cullen sandra chapter 10 . 9/30/2012
I enjoyed your little twisted fic, :). I have just a few questions, as i have never seen the movie, i don't know much about the story line. First question: " did edward only play that he had a phobia of the outside, and being all shy? Was that just so nobody would question him about her being gone?
2.: "what pill did edward give bella?
3.: "why did he kill his gf? It can't be just because she was a gold digger?!
4.: edward said that he understood jasper now, after hearing about alice! What did he mean by that?
cullen sandra chapter 8 . 9/30/2012
2 dead bodies? How come she did not question that statement.
Kikabrona chapter 10 . 9/27/2012
fuckingamazing lol
lebells1 chapter 10 . 8/23/2012
Dark, twisted brilliance.

Ripped out, mind-boggling. One of a kind.

If the movie is even half of what this is, I'm not surprised. Your's surpass it in all other ways.

90 mins- the epitome of mindfck and dark telling. And, the epilogue was an extension of your genuine creativity, mixed w/ dark and badassary.

Danger. Thrill. Restraint.

/bells xx
rizzyg2 chapter 10 . 7/22/2012
That was so so so so so good! Seriously, you have the best imagination ever- I enjoyed that from the very start to the very finish! I loved the twist with Alice, having her decapitated and all, it was brilliant and 100% unexpected XD
Okay, down to the nitty gritty: there could have been more back story as to why Edward couldn't leave the house, and his overcoming that could have been done with more detail and hardship I think; but that's the only thing I'd fault about the whole story. It's clever, fast-paced, and kept me captivated all the way through- I'm actually glad that I didn't have to read it chapter at a time, but rather got to read the whole thing start to finish, all in one go, because I know that the anticipation of what would happen next would have kept me on tenterhooks for hours.
I'm not sure I quite deserve credit for betaing that I didn't manage to do (damn exams/holiday), but I can sure as hell tell you that it's bloody amazing now!
Finally, I think the epilogue is a stroke of genius- I love the twist on twilight, it's just fantastic. Brilliant use of the material, brilliant plot twists, just overall brilliance, yet again ;) 3 xxxx
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