Reviews for Here's To The Future
KioshiUshima chapter 4 . 12/25/2015
Hokay, I got to this chapter, just to see if I could continue, but I can't. I like the idea of this story, a lot. Like, this is really great, conception-wise. I just have issues with the inconsistencies, and the way your writing is structured. I'm not trying to flame or anything, I'm really happy you're writing something like this, it's really a good idea. But, Washington is on the West Coast, and DC is part of Washington D.C., as in Washington District of Columbia, and it's on the East Coast. Used to be part of Virgina, actually. Jenna lives on the reservation, but she's the sister to Quinn's mum, who is an obviously white American woman. Jenna is tan, and dark-haired. That's fine. But she can only live on the reservation if she's Native American, or married to a Native American. Even if she's engaged to the chief, that'd cause a shit-ton of controversy, and discredit him for not following traditional laws. This is coming from someone who has Native roots, and has cousins who grew up on a reservation. In an earlier chapter, you had Quinn pull a fast one on her folks, and leave her sonogram picture under her pillow, for them to find... but then she tells Jenna she's never been to the doctor? Also, how far along is Quinn? When she says 'a month ago I was head cheerleader and dating the quarterback', does she mean a month ago she'd been faithful, or, a month ago, nobody had known she was pregnant? Jenna says Jacob is around her age, so does that mean Quinn is coming into the story the year after Bella does? Is this the second semester of Quinn's Sophomore year, or did Finn find out about the pregnancy sooner than in the show, and they haven't had winter break yet? Don't Jared and Paul phase during the summer, and therefore Jared has already seen Kim, since he imprints on her shortly after school starts up again? So many questions! Haha. If Quinn is transferring in during second semester, then Jacob should be all tied up in Bella right now. If it's still before winter break, then Bella is still a zombie. It's things like this, that make me like or dislike a story. And I love your concept, I just wish it was more, well, thought out. Thank you for all your hard work. And don't stop writing, okay? Every time you write, you get better, and that's awesome.
Guest chapter 10 . 7/11/2015
Darn I really hope you'll update this one rather Quick because this is really good.
Love it so far
Chris chapter 10 . 3/16/2015
Aargh! Wtf, Puck?!
Guest chapter 10 . 11/8/2013
Please update! I like it a lot!
ToxicTears14 chapter 10 . 9/24/2013
I like this story ... A little short but good.. I like the couple can't wait to see what happens...
daeb chapter 10 . 8/1/2013
Can't wait for more!
India chapter 10 . 7/31/2013
More please
Megan chapter 10 . 7/26/2013
This is a really good story please continue
Snow Aella chapter 9 . 5/5/2013
bookfreak25 chapter 9 . 1/4/2013
I Love it i really love that it is a Quinn and Jared pairing especially a pregnant Quinn which is so shockingly rare i love what i have read so far and i am really looking forward to when everyone finds out and their reactions i think it will just make Jared love her more i can't wait to read the next chapter
Please Update Soon :)
Valentina Alexandrea Sparrow chapter 9 . 11/18/2012
Awe cute moreeee pleasee
chickentikka99 chapter 9 . 11/6/2012
Wow ur story is really good so far please update soon
Samcro-princess20 chapter 9 . 7/23/2012
awww i think this a great story i hope the Cullen come in some how stir the pot a little that is always good
Fanfic Nazzi chapter 1 . 7/8/2012
You have the grammar of either ghetto trash or a five year old who's just learning to write -_-
gleekforlife99 chapter 9 . 7/2/2012
I like it can't wait for more.
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