|Reviews for Craigslist|
| smpnst chapter 3 . 3/4
Please! make en Epilogue! :D
| Guest chapter 3 . 1/29
I loved it, but halfway through I realized...did thru ever kiss :o
| Guest chapter 3 . 1/7
Please tell me you aren't going to make us wait until May to update! TT!
Please update PLEASE! I haven't really read any worthwhile fictions...I'm dying to know what happens!
| D3m0nDarks chapter 3 . 11/12/2013
honestly, at first when I was reading I was thinking it would be better if the story lasted longer, but the way you ended it was perfect! It's so cute, and extremely well-written! im so tired but I couldnt put it down! (my 3DS, not my computer lol) definately one of the best stories ive read in a while!
| Asian Delicacy chapter 3 . 11/4/2013
This was so freakishly AWESOME! I stumbled upon it by mistake and boy am I ever glad I did. It was by far the funniest, sexiest, dramatically hottest fics I've ever read. I loved it and there was no part of it I didn't enjoy reading. Inuyasha was the sexiest, domineering Virgin I've had the pleasure of getting acquainted with. I loved it when he called Kagome out about getting horny. That was priceless. I so didn't want it to end. Wish there was more. Superb Job. Can't wait to read more from you.
| Asian Delicacy chapter 2 . 11/4/2013
This is really good!
| Asian Delicacy chapter 1 . 11/4/2013
This is good!
| Ummm chapter 3 . 10/17/2013
| Penthesileia chapter 3 . 10/9/2013
Gahhhh! This was so good! I would have reviewed each part, but I didn't want to take that long to find out what was going to happen next. And even then, I wish this had been longer!
I LOVED LOVED LOVED! Inuyasha in this. The mix of tough action hero/stuttering nervous virgin/confident sex god was absolutely delicious. He made me melt and laugh my head off. Soggy cereal! Mwhahahahaaaaaaaa. I loved his interactions with Kagome, I just wish we could have seen some more of his bromance with Miroku. (Cough, cough, Sequel! cough cough) Miroku was a ton of fun too. Naraku was wonderfully creepy. Really, great job with all your male characters.
And of course, Kagome was fabulous. I loved how you wrote her voice. Thank you for not turning her into an idiot.
So I loved this fic, but I also feel a little cheated. I wish it was longer! I want more Miroku, more history about this shadowy organization, more drama and more tender moments of Kagome patching Inuyasha up before they throw themselves at each other, more stupid Souta pranks, more embarrassing Kagome's mom, more EVERYTHING! Gah.
But even though you didn't turn this into some giant, complicated epic, I'm super grateful to have even read three chapters of it. Your writing style is so much fun. Quick, clever, and smooth. The flow was great and everything was on point. I didn't have to skip lines or sections to get to the parts I cared about, and I'll probably come back and reread this again at some point.
In conclusion: I freakin' loved it. Amazing work!
| Guest chapter 3 . 10/6/2013
This is nice! Can't help but love this story, very well written! I specifically enjoyed the lemon. The contrast between the "shy" InuYasha and "aggressive" InuYasha was just too great to not feel sizzling hot for! Yay! Can't wait for the last chapter. Who would wanna miss the date, after all? Certainly, not I! *grins stupidly* Job well done! Keep it up, Rochoa-san! :)
| ooo Blue Rose ooo chapter 3 . 8/27/2013
No words... really, no words... lol. And in a good way. This was amazing. I didn't read this story until today, so this review is for all chapters. One of the best lemons written in a long time. Graphic, but not trashy. Explicit, but tasteful. Love Love Love! :P
| BlueFireIce chapter 3 . 8/21/2013
This story is awesome. I love it a lot and you did a fantastic job!
| Esther Clemmens chapter 1 . 8/8/2013
Souta has be come a really evil kid. That has to be the meanest prank ever! But still so very funny!
| Star chapter 2 . 7/7/2013
"...Who in the world thought dog ears on a person were cute?"
Me! I would love a boyfriend with adorable puppy dog ears _
| Guest chapter 3 . 7/5/2013
Great story! Unique plot, endearingly flawed characters, suspenseful action, hilariously embarassing situations, very funny dialogue, and very funny - while also so realistic - inner monologues. Bravo on the lemon - packed not only with personality, and with chemistry, but with comedy too! (my only tiny gripe - you forgot to mention the moment at which he began using the wall to brace her - a bit confusing). And there are a few scattered spelling errors in the story, but nothing to detract from enjoying the tale.
I'm SO glad you finished this, I kept hoping and searching for your update. I SO would love to see an epilogue: the first date, the meet-the-mom awkwardness, the next lemon! And Souta meeting his penance.
I look forward to more from you. Many thanks to you for sharing your talent...