Reviews for Unknown
Guest chapter 23 . 7/5
This is awesome and wow who new Zeus a could b such a cruel bastared I mean sirously just cause Percy was to powerful he can't have any contact with anyone out of my fathers palace if that was me I would b telling him to stick his lightning bolt up his ass while saying I'm powerful your power fuller and got a bigger ego deal with it but that's just me (sorry for the language just the other words I was thinking didn't fit right) So yeah awesome story
Guest chapter 18 . 2/10
I need some answers. 1) who was the attacker? 2) what happened to Annabeth? 3) does Percy ever get to see annabeth and his friends again? 4) what actually happened in this story? Like what? 5) why did the attacker do this to percy? 6) can you please make more chapters or something where percy and poseidon go to Zeus and get him to let percy be trained better and see annabeth again. The ending was good, but I cried.
Rosycat chapter 22 . 11/18/2015
Wat. Wow. Confuzzling
Rosycat chapter 19 . 11/18/2015
Huh? PERCE created him? WHAT THE.
Rosycat chapter 17 . 11/18/2015
Uh oh. YIKE. Stupid Apollo. AND HE'S THE FREAKING GOD OF MEDICINE TOO.
Rosycat chapter 15 . 11/18/2015
She no dead? Just a trick? THANK THE GODS. But poor Perce... He doesn't know that.
Rosycat chapter 14 . 11/18/2015
Sally? IT BETTER NOT BE.
Anonymous chapter 12 . 9/23/2015
U made a mistake here, Percy yelled, which meant the poison should've activated and killed him.
Cia chapter 23 . 6/19/2015
Omg.. Sooo good!
Guest chapter 23 . 6/13/2015
WHAT THE SHIT!
dead chapter 23 . 3/21/2015
You literally killed me with that cliff hanger!
this was good, this was REALLY good its not amateur writing it looks professional; it might be good to stray from the "happy ending" clichè but the readers are amateur and they crave a happy ending. Even just a smidge of ending! Because what you did there was not an ending, that was torture, a really impressive torture but a torture nonetheless, please make a sequel. w
Work on Annabeth or something, anything!
MagicWriterK chapter 8 . 2/15/2015
Oh Annabeth is totally going to beat Percy up when he comes home. I can see it now... "WHERE HAVE YOU BEEN SEAWEED BRAIN?!" cue the judo flip "DO YOU HAVE ANY IDEA HOW WORRIED I WAS?!" cue the slap.
MagicWriterK chapter 7 . 2/15/2015
Wait, why is Percy so sure everyone will die if he doesn't complete this? Is the figure really that terrifying?
MagicWriterK chapter 6 . 2/15/2015
DOWN WITH ZEUS! GET 'IM, POSEIDON AND HADES!
MagicWriterK chapter 5 . 2/15/2015
COUGHhe went to Alaska in Son of NeptuneCOUGH
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