Reviews for Unknown
dead chapter 23 . 3/21
You literally killed me with that cliff hanger!
this was good, this was REALLY good its not amateur writing it looks professional; it might be good to stray from the "happy ending" clichè but the readers are amateur and they crave a happy ending. Even just a smidge of ending! Because what you did there was not an ending, that was torture, a really impressive torture but a torture nonetheless, please make a sequel. w
Work on Annabeth or something, anything!
MagicWriterK chapter 8 . 2/15
Oh Annabeth is totally going to beat Percy up when he comes home. I can see it now... "WHERE HAVE YOU BEEN SEAWEED BRAIN?!" cue the judo flip "DO YOU HAVE ANY IDEA HOW WORRIED I WAS?!" cue the slap.
MagicWriterK chapter 7 . 2/15
Wait, why is Percy so sure everyone will die if he doesn't complete this? Is the figure really that terrifying?
MagicWriterK chapter 6 . 2/15
DOWN WITH ZEUS! GET 'IM, POSEIDON AND HADES!
MagicWriterK chapter 5 . 2/15
COUGHhe went to Alaska in Son of NeptuneCOUGH
MagicWriterK chapter 4 . 2/15
And you will not take the blame? What's that line supposed to mean? IS EVERYONE GOING TO THINK PERCY WENT ROGUE OR SOMETHING?
MagicWriterK chapter 3 . 2/14
ALL SYSTEMS RED ALERT! RED ALERT! PERCY JACKSON IS DOWN! COMPLETE PANIC AND UTTER PANDEMONIUM IS ACCEPTABLE!
MagicWriterK chapter 1 . 2/14
Good old Sally is amazingly perceptive, especially when it comes to her son.
Guest chapter 23 . 9/18/2014
Um, WHAT THE HELL JUST HAPPENED!?
One question chapter 23 . 7/23/2014
I have one question... Have you ever watched Ultimate Spider Man? How 'bout DeadPool? It's a show I occasionally watch when my brother is watching. My favorite show is Ultimate DeadPool. The attacker acted exactly like him. It's on Netflix. It is funny... Just... I was reading this and instantly thought, "DeadPool," lol
Lauren chapter 16 . 4/30/2014
Nvm about my earlier comment
Lauren chapter 12 . 4/30/2014
Um... You said that when percy screams he dies right sorry might be from other fanfic?!
Yukibrooke chapter 23 . 12/10/2013
Fantastic
CFD999 chapter 1 . 11/29/2013
Sequel? Please!
HazelPrincessofJewels chapter 12 . 9/7/2013
Wait... If he yelled, why didn't he die? Other than that, really good chapter ;)
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