Reviews for Prelude
Mana's Madness chapter 1 . 12/19/2013
Aww so sweet! Loved it. Was the sequel ever made though? I never found it :/
TexasDreamer01 chapter 1 . 6/25/2013
Larka chapter 1 . 9/9/2012
Hey Toya! I'm too lazy to log into my account, but I just had to let you know how utterly adorable this was! God, it makes me miss YGO soooo much! And your stories, of course! I just loved this. I am definitely going to re-read Only Mine again now, hehe. Your writing is just so easy to picture, and the way you present the characters is spot on! I wish I could draw, I'd be doing fan art of this like crazy, hah!

I hope you keep writing. It is always a treat to get to read your work. Always.
Guest chapter 1 . 7/2/2012
This had me laughing and giggling the whole time May I just say that you're an outstanding author? cuz you really are! I'm a huge fan after you wrote "Only Mine" AMAZING STORY by the way. Wish I had the novel you based it off of, that really sounds like a great book to read about right now, but I would most likely imagine Atemu & Yugi as the main characters though3.

Anyway, this story was really cute and fluffy! Hope to see more one-shots for the "Only Mine" universe collection)
Luna Motou chapter 1 . 6/27/2012
This was a great one shot, i couldnt help but laugh at the end. Honestly, Atemu notices the flowers NOW? XDDD i cant wait to see more of your great writing, keep up the work *hugs*
Lady-Nebkhat chapter 1 . 6/23/2012
Awwww i loved this :) i can't wait to read the sequel you are working on.
Elizabeth Price chapter 1 . 6/16/2012
kdyfzsljujvubvyfghzikqsr SO MUCH FLUFF I COULD EXPLODE. Natoya, you are just a heavenly writer and you always manage to move me. I vote that while you're on your way to the town/city you're going to vacation in that you write. Travelling, at least for me, has always been one way to bring about some inspiration. Mainly I just want more from you, I cannot deny. Stop living a life and start writing 24/7. T.T (Joking) Anyways, this was beautiful, and it's so nice to see all of the characters from OM being all cute and happy. They deserve it.
yamiXyugi-setoXjou-4ever chapter 1 . 6/13/2012
ahahaha lol you cant hide anything from atemu _ he's the all-powerful smexy pharaoh lol :p loved it _ keep it up and DFTBA!
Dark Mage of Sea chapter 1 . 6/10/2012
*finishing Yugi's thoughts* "No they weren't... You can't prove it... You love me!" XD Nice way to end this cute chapter! I totally love MahadoxMana fics! It's hard to find some really good ones nowadays. 'Toya-chan! You did an amazing job like always! You have cease to disapoint me! Good job, girll! Good job!
redconvoy chapter 1 . 6/10/2012
Cute story! I was surprised to see a side story. You have to write more when you get the time :D
dragonlady222 chapter 1 . 6/9/2012
The ending was cute. Atemu took a while but figured out where the flowers came from. I'm glad everyone is so happy.
Flower of the desert553 chapter 1 . 6/9/2012
Ooooh, someone is in trouble! Ha-ha-ha! That was really funny in the end. And the whole one-shot was simply adorable. Loved it! :)
Atsuma chapter 1 . 6/9/2012
Noooo too short! Wow it's been a while since i've seen anything from the OMverse. Loved it! :)
Kearitona Sjachraelgil chapter 1 . 6/8/2012
Uh oh tea is in trouble again me thinks she will need to plant more flowers to make up for this keep up the great work gtg now ja ne
InuYoiushi chapter 1 . 6/8/2012
love it.
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