Reviews for Taking First
FantasticalMusical chapter 1 . 7/12/2014
I love how you captured Banky's thoughts. I actually wrote a story that's a tad bit like this, but had to do it from Holden's POV because I just couldn't get into Banky's head. You did and did it well! Great job!
Guest chapter 1 . 5/6/2014
Ditto to everything what hipsandhallways said!
Guest chapter 1 . 7/29/2013
BlackShorts chapter 1 . 9/29/2012
You should definatly carry this on, even if it was just meant to be a one-shot. It's too good to just leave it! I can't wait until you update again (if you do). You are a great writer :)
hipsandhallways chapter 1 . 8/14/2012
Oh my god... oh my god! How does this not have any reviews? Jesus this is so beautiful! I really wish Banky had more say in the movie and this would have been perfect. The movie didn't go into as much depth with Banky as I would have liked. You are a wonderful writer and this fic was outstanding, you arnt getting enough credit for it.
I bow to you. Words can't describe how much I love this fic.