Reviews for Lee on Zuko Alone
tangerinee chapter 1 . 2/9/2013
That was nice!
Lee is such a jerk though. I mean, Zuko's a firebender. So what? He didn't do a single bad thing while in that village. I always wished, Lee would somewhen show up again in the show
iamtyping98 chapter 1 . 7/7/2012
I always felt really bad for Zuko when Lee said that. I love the writing and the unique point of view. This was great!
vhj chapter 1 . 6/9/2012
As I scrolled through the list of stories, all I saw was one horrible story after another; then I saw this one. Congrats, you can write! My only suggestions are: 1) Make sure you use dashes instead of hyphens, and 2) tie together the beginning and the end (In the beginning, Lee talks about his dad saying that firebenders are dead inside, but you never return to the thought.) That, of course, is just my oppinion (except about the abundance of crappy stories on this site, that can't be argued with.)
Somariel chapter 1 . 6/9/2012
Nice story. My only real criticism is that you might want to replace the word "messiah" with the word "savior". The word "messiah" has strong connections to Christianity and the Western world, so it seems rather out of place in a story set in a world based on eastern cultures
NotWellKnown chapter 1 . 6/8/2012
This is a pretty interesting story, and probably the first I've seen from Lee's POV. You can definitely catch some of the conflicted feeling Lee is feeling. It might be nice to make another chapter, set after Zuko becomes Fire Lord.