Reviews for Rising of the Moon
Mew Mew Boudica chapter 18 . 5/23/2014
Whooo. That got intense towards the end. Very interested in seeing where it all goes. :)
However, one thing. A cat lashing its tail isn't relieving tension, it's just a way to show "Oh my god I'm sooo pissed at you get away from me." Likewise, a twitching tail shows conflict or internal strife, usually due to surroundings.
Ah, that was long... sorry. Just my two bits. :) Good story!
The Real Outsider chapter 1 . 5/21/2014
Excuse me. I was using a story like this.
Mew Mew Boudica chapter 17 . 5/20/2014
Yeeeeah, is good! Really cute. :3 Maybe this'll get me back to reading Warriors fanfic... XD But no, I either didn't see or don't remember any inconsistencies, no worries! :)
Guest chapter 2 . 9/19/2013
BAZINGA!and cinderheart and lionblaze are acting like an old married couple_ hahaha!
Silversong chapter 16 . 8/12/2013
Write more soon
Silverfox chapter 14 . 7/9/2013
Lol "since when are you a queen?" "Who's the father?" XD
Every cat chapter 13 . 7/5/2013
Lol this is funny :D
Ravenheart chapter 12 . 7/5/2013
Lol they high on cat nip XD
Ambercloud chapter 9 . 7/5/2013
Hey! Amberpaw has my name sorta.. :/ :)
Every cat chapter 2 . 7/5/2013
ALL: LOL CINDERHEART AND LIONBLAZE!
Tawnyfur chapter 1 . 7/5/2013
Im back! *Rubs head were Ravenheart hit it* Humph - Rocks funny
candyflower22 chapter 16 . 4/12/2013
awesome story i think the prophecy is great plz update soon
FlowerFur chapter 15 . 12/11/2012
"Night-talon bolted upright and ran out in the general direction of the nursery. A loud thud was soon heard as he collided with something that wasn't the nursery. "
I laughed so much X)
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"Moonspirit noted the Twoleg house, glowing with its yellow lights against the darkness. Like Night-talon's eyes."
Awwww...
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"RUMG!" "WHREMNG? THF FINDOF SHufF!" "Thrrr! Glurfph door!" "WHAF?"
That's epic too X)
Guest chapter 15 . 12/10/2012
:D Yaaaaaaaaaaay you updated! :D:D
Guest chapter 15 . 12/10/2012
Hurry w/ the next one!
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