Reviews for Confessions
Guest chapter 1 . 10/11/2016
Idris Organa chapter 1 . 1/3/2013
It started so sweet and went to so very hot very quickly. Thanks for sharing!
WhosInTheAttic chapter 1 . 7/8/2012
I love the sex on the beach fantasy, but you're showing rather than telling. Rather than write what the characters are doing, write what they are feeling physically and emotionally. It allows the reader to better connect with what's happening in the story.
leechlover6685 chapter 1 . 6/15/2012