Reviews for To the Point of Distraction
AngelRuby235 chapter 1 . 10/17/2013
Ds was nice...really nice. It truly was a pleasure to read ds & the lemon was an added bonus:-P Lol! But Ita was somewhat aggressive here... I mean he never insults or shouts out curses at Germany intentionally (that's Romano's job! Lol!) so I guess he was a tweeny weeny bit OOC here. Other than that, ds was very enjoyable. Thank you:-)
NilonCross chapter 1 . 6/19/2013
Love it!
Ischemia chapter 1 . 3/30/2013
Perfect!
JustSpirky chapter 1 . 3/18/2013
This was beautiful!
Meg Fiction chapter 1 . 11/25/2012
Great stuff! :D
Guest chapter 1 . 11/11/2012
No matter how many times I re-read it I still love this oneshot!
black-ice-alchemist chapter 1 . 10/13/2012
W-wow...this isn't fanfiction...it's art...
Natsuna-chan chapter 1 . 9/29/2012
Oh...mein...Gott! I think i just died! That was amazing and soooo beautifully written. I loved it, and it was just sooo cute and smexy and...ja you get my drift :D but anyway it was a great read and just made my jaw drop. Loved, loved, loved it!
ShatteredHeart-BlueSapphire chapter 1 . 8/6/2012
This was cute. Then again, it was a GerIta, so I guess it's kind of a given. Lol. Awesome job!
XxXSoManyFandoms-.-'XxX chapter 1 . 8/4/2012
Sexy yaoi smut oh how I love you! Great story! Super sexy! ;) I loved it! :D
Guest chapter 1 . 8/1/2012
ahhhhh the most beautiful and hot GerIta that i ever read! great job!
ah, in italian the last phrase of feliciano, say it "Voglio che tu faccia l'amore con me tutta la notte" and non "La fare l'amore con me tutta la notte"
HikaruFullmoon chapter 1 . 7/28/2012
wow.. what a lemon o3o
you have my respect *bows* i liked this oneshot and it's going into my favorites :D
but one thing, 'cause my native language actually is german and it would be awesome if you could correct your "verlassen Sie sofort!" into "Verschwinde, sofort!" or "Lass mich endlich in Ruhe und verschwinde!"... cause that would be something that one can really say in german .
Guest chapter 1 . 7/16/2012
Awwwww...so cute and sexy at the same time.
Guest chapter 1 . 7/7/2012
very good fanfic :)
i just have one problem and that is when germany says: 'Verlassen sie sofort' a) the word sie should be capitalized because siethey while Sieyou formal. b)when using the verb verlassen you need to add what the person is supposed to be leaving like 'verlassen Sie sofort das Zimmer (the room)' so instead you should use the verb gehen (go). this leaves you with 'gehen Sie sofort' but as im pretty sure Germany and Italy are past formality the Sie is unnecessary which leaves you with 'geh sofort' to match Germanys anger youd add ! 'geh! sofort!'
i know, very long grammar lesson there sorry . especially since you probably used a translator page and don't actually know any german, but i wanted you to see the logic behind it instead of me just saying 'youre wrong its supposed to be this' and you being like' uh what?'
but other than that i quite enjoyed it
crazy YinYang writer7 chapter 1 . 7/5/2012
I just love reading this over and over again!
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