Reviews for Unforgiven
Teufel1987 chapter 8 . 4/8/2014
Nice chapter!

I don't see why anyone would come to buy the diamond ... generally people come offering money for such things when they know that the owner is in need of cash ...

Considering Harry's remarks about his fortune, and the fact that they seem to be the pairing here, I doubt that Ginny would ever be in that position!
CrossingWands chapter 8 . 4/8/2014
Awwww its nice to see Harry and Ginny growing closer.
Sirip chapter 7 . 3/11/2014
Pretty please, update?
Guest chapter 7 . 2/13/2014
If i was Harry, and had to uproot my life of the past 3 years to be given a case that other aurors were working on, especially the person the i was supremely pissed off with, i would have left and gone back to America
Lazov chapter 1 . 2/12/2014
Why is it that no one uses an abortion spell?
nesciamema chapter 7 . 2/10/2014
Can't wait to see how Harry tries to convince Hermione to let Rosie see the Weasleys.
undergroundirector chapter 7 . 2/10/2014
Great to have you update again.

Loving the whole Harry and Rosie interactions hope there is more. I'm really looking forward to seeing how Hermoine tells Ron 'by the way you have a daughter'. Also how Harry and Ginny's next interaction occurs.

Hope you update soon.
Teufel1987 chapter 4 . 2/10/2014
It's a pity that Harry didn't get to know Ginny properly here. She was quite a positive influence on his life in canon. She was the one who managed to get him out of his funk when Arthur was attacked by Voldemort's snake.
And he did have quite a few blissful days with her before everything went to hell in his sixth year …
Guest chapter 7 . 2/10/2014
keep it comming -entertaining
Guest chapter 7 . 2/10/2014
Brilliant story. Read all 7 chapters then. I really wish you would give Harry just a tad more warmth to his character. It would be easy, not to mention natural - for Harry or Hermione to explain their situation (i.e. Rose) and why things lead to the status quo. I look forward to seeing your next update
Teufel1987 chapter 3 . 2/10/2014
Well, the elder wand is considered a fairy tale anyway. So people won't really connect what Harry said to the story.

He might as well say he has the glass slipper … who's going to think "hey, did he mean Cinderella's slipper?"

Besides, I think they were more caught up in the whole duel and the fact that Voldemort was facing off against Harry. They'd have probably forgotten what was said by the end of the day.
Guest chapter 2 . 2/10/2014
Hermonie and harry are both in the wrong. Not telling him about his kid, that also a crime sence Ron could have sued for custody, Harry a bad friend to keep this a secret
Guest chapter 1 . 2/10/2014
Sorry if hermonie ever showed even a little bit the she like Ron she never would haveeft and since it Ron kid Harry does not have any say
nesciamema chapter 6 . 1/14/2014
Hilarious, Harry a nit unlnowingly jealous of poor old Ned. Can't wait to see what's in store for Rosie's reveal.
m149 chapter 6 . 1/14/2014
Terrific chapter.
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