Reviews for The Bastard's Love
Guest chapter 7 . 8/12/2016
This story has a great premise, but the writing needs to be edited for grammatical mistakes and pacing issues before it can be a well-written story. Despite the interesting plot, I kept getting distracted and off-put by the constantly changing verb tenses, so I couldn't keep reading.
PJ chapter 32 . 5/12/2015
If only,and reading this story made me wish ole George would write something similar!
Malyx Blackfyre chapter 4 . 2/18/2015
Malyx Blackfyre chapter 19 . 11/25/2014
Awesome! But you made Jon Snow a bit out of character.
Echelon8394 chapter 32 . 8/16/2012
bess woodvile first, thanks for ur review. second, maybe later i'll do a Joffrey/OC. third, in this story i made Jon Rhaegar and Lyanna's son. technically, Rhaegar's son would ascend the throne before Viserys, but Viserys help rule Westeros, so that technically made him sorta a king. fourth thank you for saying it bcuz i just realised that i forgot Dany's dragon. i turned them to human instead. hehe ) and i decided that Viserys should have his fair share in the story because he could've be given another chance instead of being poured molten gold till death. all and all thanks for your review. i appreciate it )
Bess Woodville chapter 32 . 8/16/2012
It had an excellent wedding. No dragons for Dany :(? Aww and Viserys is so wonderful in this story
Bess Woodville chapter 31 . 8/16/2012
Yay! Jon and Vissie ruler of Westeros
Bess Woodville chapter 30 . 8/16/2012
Why Jon? Why Jon? :( Viserys should have been king
Bess Woodville chapter 29 . 8/16/2012
Oh come on, Joff and Kia were perfect together.
Bess Woodville chapter 16 . 8/16/2012
This Story is so exciting!
Bess Woodville chapter 7 . 8/16/2012
Awww Viserys became softer
Bess Woodville chapter 5 . 8/16/2012
Interesting chapter
Echelon8394 chapter 28 . 8/1/2012
to liz, i actually made a mistake at this chp and i was not sure how to edit it so i delete it and re upload it. hehe, kinda new to this. so sorry bout it and i'll post new chp soon )
liz chapter 28 . 8/1/2012
i think you uploaded this already... It came up with no new chapter for today 8/1/2012
liz chapter 18 . 7/14/2012
i love this story can't wait for more updates
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