Reviews for A Little Test
Reesa chapter 1 . 8/25/2016
Woah, I can't even begin to say how much of a ride this piece was! My stomach did practical loop-di-loops, jerking me every which-way in excitement! I'm putting this in my top favorite Portal Fiction series, this was amazing! Love your writing!
Guest chapter 1 . 7/30/2016
My favorite Portal Fanfic ever! Please make more torture Fanfics!
Frolicking Demon chapter 7 . 1/7/2016
I've been looking for a good torture fic to read and thankfully I stumbled across this one. Chapter 5 was goood. I was half expecting a bad end with Wheatley dying, not that I would have complained seeing as I am a fan of bad ends and they're hard to come across, but the continuation into sequels has left me curious so I will be checking those out next.
kayathedragon chapter 5 . 4/11/2015
THAT WAS CRUEL. THAT WAS WAY TOO CRUEL AND YOU KNOW IT. IM SCREAMING AND I WANNA KICK SOMETHING THAT WAS AWFUL I LOVE IT
Guest chapter 7 . 4/18/2014
Whyyyyy. I AM FUCKING CRYING RIGHT NOW!
Guest chapter 6 . 4/18/2014
CHELL YOU FUCKING SON OF A TWO FACED BITCH HOW COULD YOU LEAVE HIM!11!1! *cries*
Guest chapter 7 . 3/21/2014
Chapter 6 was scary if you think of that happening to you... And it is also scary of thinking of looking into Wheatley's eye.. That fear.
Guest chapter 2 . 3/21/2014
I love it! I love all your stories! I may not be a core made for fanfic's bit I'm working on my skills. I love all of this. I never find good Wheatley ones but this is just WOW! I would keep rambling but I need to get back to reading. - Kyaon the Core
Jaywings chapter 7 . 3/13/2014
All right why did I stop on chapter six and go without reviewing this chapter for so long when this is the one with the actual sort of nice ending DX

YO GLADOS what you did was NOT SCIENCE it was psychological and physical torture of a poor helpless core. I mean Wheatley did deserve some sort of retribution for what he did but gosh

Is it 4000 Kelvin? Or 4000 Kelvins? I know 4000 degrees Kelvin is wrong but I don't know the actual proper way to say it.

noooooo why wheatley whyyyyyy

Oh, you wrote "humanely possible" instead of "humanly possible" ;

AAAAAAAAHHHHHHH well, I've finished this story, so I suppose I'll be moving onto the next one now
Jaywings chapter 6 . 2/27/2014
My only consolation about rereading this story, and especially this chapter, is that I'll get to read A Few Repairs next. Although that one's pretty sad in places too. aaaggghhh

noooOOOOOOO

All right, I'll admit that when I first read this story I wasn't totally clear on what Chell was supposed to be stealing. I don't... know what I thought it was, but I didn't realize it was the portal gun until Wheatley mentioned it in the next fic, I think. I guess I thought she was supposed to be trying to steal Wheatley, which confused me when she left him behind, heh... I'm dumb DX

Oh my gosh GLaDOS's lines. s;kdljfs

You know I kind of miss the "Vital testing apparatus destroyed" thing. I wish they'd kept that in Portal 2, or at least had some sort of reaction from GLaDOS when you destroy the cameras. Then again, maybe they made up for that with Wheatley's screens...

Aw, that's not true, Wheatley did make sacrifices to get them out of there :( But he is selfish, yeah.

did I ever mention that you're evil
Jaywings chapter 5 . 2/27/2014
Okay, where was I... GOOD GRIEF OF COURSE I LEFT OFF ON THIS CHAPTER
"This is the part where I stop pulling punches" aka The Part Where You Kill Us

*Shudders* Uggghhh... Falling into an acid pit has probably got to be one of the worst ways to go in Aperture...

Haha I like the idea that there's a speed limit on the management rail :P

Oh noooo Wheatley's ranting, nonoNO whyyyyyyy

so this is a pretty short review ahh sorry
Jaywings chapter 4 . 2/19/2014
I love that the bird's name is Caroline aaahhh

Oh man bad mental images about that poor test subject that fell nonononono

Ooh, the thing with Wheatley never going to get repaired... that's another really upsetting thing :(
Jaywings chapter 3 . 2/19/2014
Awww, noo, Wheatley feeling depressed makes me so sad :(

Oh gosh the names of the crows

GLaDOS has kind of a weird fixation on monsters and what exactly makes you one, huh

Oh man I forgot about the colors bursting in front of Wheatley's vision. Thinking about that Tumblr post with the VCR where that same thing happened, that's really upsetting...
Jaywings chapter 2 . 2/19/2014
Oh whoops I started reading the next chapter and got caught up in the story before I remembered to comment as I go. I'm always doing that...

I love GLaDOS's slow clap processor. That is the best thing.

Ugghh dangling that high from the ceiling and swinging back and forth does sound sickening. Poor Wheatley...
Jaywings chapter 1 . 2/19/2014
Heeeey so I've decided against my better judgment to reread this story and try not to cry, and also I want to leave comments on every chapter because I don't think I did that last time.

Preparing to go get my heart shattered again hooray

Oh, I like that explanation for the communication link. ...Hahaha oh Wheatley, "Who talks as much as you?" no one. no one at all. nope.

The password is ZZZZZB? Holy crap how long did THAT take to crack O.O

Aha, this was the reason I wanted to reread this fic today! In the shower this morning I was thinking about the scene where Wheatley wakes up and Space Core's gone, and I was trying to remember which fic that was from. I remembered correctly! :D ...Wait why are there skeletons on the moon

Who died there

Did Aperture send up some sort of ill-fated moon expedition long ago

Can you even decompose in space?

I like the way you get Wheatley back to Earth. It's more plausible than him being knocked out of his orbit, somehow falling back to Earth, and just happening to land at Aperture or in Chell's backyard or whatever.

"so she could savor the sound of his screaming" Gosh GLaDOS that's just a little sadistic- TITLE DROP

accchhh nooooo why did i think this was a good ideaaaaa D'X

And this is only the first chapter... and now unfortunately my school's Internet is refusing to work at ALL so I'll have to wait until I get home to send this and read the next chapter.
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