Reviews for Here Lies Everything
dorko525 chapter 1 . 10/12/2013
Nicely written, I teared up horribly lol
Shanea1981 chapter 1 . 9/4/2013
Oh my... that is so beautiful! Thanks for writing and sharing!
Zephyros-Phoenix chapter 1 . 8/21/2012
This just broke my heart. I read one where Fenris was the one who died in the fight once and this is a really neat twist. You really tugged at my heartstrings with this one and I could really feel Fenris' pain. Fantastic work.
No Longer Active and Long Gone chapter 1 . 6/11/2012
Very lovely piece, it captures the mix of emotions a character like Fenris would feel in such a complex situation. I feel like you could do more with this, really. Sure, the first few minutes after are interesting enough...but doesn't the real pain lay in the days beyond, when the funeral is over with and one cannot remember the exact tone of the deceased voice? Just a suggestion.
Narcina chapter 1 . 6/9/2012
I love a good tragic story. Beautifully written. Great work!
Thaeonblade chapter 1 . 6/9/2012
Shoot...why'd you have to pull the rug out from under Fenris like that?

Otherwise, great introspection and writing.