Reviews for Fractured
RoswellianMisha chapter 1 . 4/9/2015
I seriously love your style. I'm not a big fan of jumping up and down the road, but I do like to get snapshots of a long life. And getting it right is tricky as hell.

I did get lost once or twice, but it more than compensated with the rest. I found the very far-future to be the most interesting one, and absolutely love how much she didn't want to admit she wanted to get married... awwnnnn

Great job!
esmik chapter 1 . 6/14/2012
Its very interesting! Loved the way u see the relations between the characters!
Liz chapter 1 . 6/10/2012
Please continue this! I want a "Training II", want to see a reunion between Micheal and Selene and Eve finally learning that Micheal is her father! Please Please continue, wonderful writing!
MBrabs1996 chapter 1 . 6/10/2012
Nice, but if i can just correct something? their daughters name is Eve, not Nyssa. Just thought i'd tell you, because i didn't know if you knew that or not.