|Reviews for Phoenix Phantom|
| SakuraKoi chapter 1 . 3/1
| Rose the packs Fang chapter 12 . 2/27
Fantastic story! Not often you see someone having Dani go to Hogwarts instead of Danny! I'm glad you had the point of there being murderers right around the corner, it's a thought that always pops up during that scene! Hope you update again soon, it was nice reading your work!
| Avengersassembly chapter 12 . 2/24
ouch. She hit Umbridge where it hurts her the most, her image and the undisputable facts. You go Dani!
I hope you can write some more soon, the next time you have some free time.
| ffnismylife chapter 12 . 2/17
OMG please update!
I love your story so much! Please try to update if you have a vacation or something!
| Guest chapter 10 . 2/17
This is EPIC! When are u going to update?
| kat chapter 12 . 2/5
I lobe your DP fanfics
| DP-fan chapter 12 . 1/30
whoa, Dani is really clever for being able to play Umbridge like that. She even got her free period after all!
| Ryvaken Lucius Tadrya chapter 10 . 1/29
This is...quickly going downhill. You're beating the prejudice and preconceptions thing pretty hard. And frankly, you don't have a leg to stand on.
The term "prejudice" refers to an opinion formed by incomplete or inadequate experience or information regarding a given topic.
The sorting into Houses is based on personality traits of each student, not their family histories or traditions or a random selection. That means that the House a student falls into is a strong indicator of that individual's behavioral patterns. A statement like "all Slytherins are ambitious and prone to devious thoughts and actions" is a generalization, true, but if an individual did not at least tend towards such traits above all others, that person simply would not be IN Slytherin in the first place.
Too, at this point these children have gone through four years with their peers. Dani's reactions to Casper High's A-List had less justification than the Gryffindors' reactions to Slytherins.
I'm also not terribly pleased with the directions you're taking some of the characters. You referenced the "Vent to Haunt" fic a few chapters back, which had serious issues with Danny entering Mary Sue territory. You're pushing Dani into a lot of the same positions, and propping up the Weasleys as the mouthpiece for everything wrong with Wizarding society. The entire British cast is coming off as unlikeable, really.
| Ryvaken Lucius Tadrya chapter 9 . 1/29
Danielle...really isn't that loyal. At all.
I mean let's look at her track record. She befriended and betrayed Danny under Vlad's orders. Then she betrayed Vlad. Then she ran off on her own. She came back only when she needed to, having developed a habit for stealing food and other minor mischief. Her fight with Vlad wasn't clean and the first thing she did was fly off to be on her own again.
Since you picked her up you haven't had her develop ties to anyone other than Danny, and even then she ran out on him when Sam showed her distrust.
I get the desire to not have another Gryffindor in the story, I really do, but sorting her into Hufflepuff seems really contrived. If she wasn't nonmagical, I'd absolutely pick Slytherin as runner up to Gryffindor.
| emeraldcris chapter 12 . 1/29
Loved it yay! :D thank you for continuing this and please keep up the amazing work! Best New Year's present!
| Death update chapter 12 . 1/25
Thanks for updating now update again or I crucio you
Update or die
| DP-fan chapter 12 . 1/22
I can't wait to see more of this. Please write on spring break or even before that! I love your story!
Plus, if this is what a chapter you don't enjoy looks like, I can't imagine how great will one you do enjoy look like!
| Guest chapter 12 . 1/19
This is awesome! Please update soon!
| Shadic the Hedgehog Author chapter 12 . 1/14
Considering Binns doesn't really HAVE a character, it's a little hard for him to be out of it. Regardless, this story is as enjoyable as the other two and I'm going to put it on my favourites list so I don't miss another update (since the last time I read this, you were on chapter 8).
| RandomCitizen chapter 12 . 1/10
See? Now THAT'S how you cause some suspicion Harry! Gotta use subtlety. :P