|Reviews for A Hero's Savior|
| roker1001 chapter 16 . 10/11/2013
This was such an amazing story x.x
I never felt so much emotion while reading before.
| Purple-Soda-Art chapter 16 . 6/30/2013
Well dang! Don't those stupid space monsters have anything better to do. Jeez! Wish they all would jump of a space bridge.
Finally, a full on sex scene! Too cute, too cute! Omg, love the whole thing. This story is pretty old, you must already have the sequel out. Well im fina go check it out.
You know i havent been to sleep all night! Jeez! Talk about insomniac! I think im obsessed with gay-ness. I have a problem. I know, but i love the idea of a man taking another man. its a beautiful thing!
| Purple-Soda-Art chapter 15 . 6/30/2013
I know this chapter must have been hard to write. i can actually hear the mashing of the backspace button, every time you mess up. Maybe it wasn't hard to write, if you had it planned out, but still! ugh!
Its a work of art. It came out great! So cute and i was smiling so hard reading this! Its very good.
Now its finally time for sex! And i mean sex this time! Steve you will carry Tony into a hotel and you will rip apart his clothes! Then you will make sweet, delicious love, making. No holding back he can take it.
He did the hulk after all, WAIT! Sorry, that's another fanfic. hee hee! Woops! So sorry.
| Purple-Soda-Art chapter 14 . 6/30/2013
Ha! The Avengers going wedding clothes shopping. Too funnie! And you added Loki, yay! I guess Tony missed out on the whole, Loki help killed the monsters thing. He was just a little busy, dying and all. He properly join the team and everything with out Tony even knowing. lolz.
HA! I knew it. That chapter with Loki helping the Avengers kill the monsters was a foreshadowing. He is now slowly but surely joining of the team! So he was (in your version) under the influence of the Tesseract. interesting. Wish they would do this for the movie. Fangirls would greatly appreciated it (like me)! now all the other fans . . . . um. idk.
| Purple-Soda-Art chapter 13 . 6/30/2013
Its over. It over! Its over, its over, its oooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooover!
I would be happy with the story ending like that. It a very creative ending. Love it!
I get what your trying to say. I think. Tony had to get himself(his mind) out of that place. He had to move on. He had to face what they did to him. He had to face the bloody broken person he was when they were done torturing him. By facing his self and helping the hurt Tony out of the warehouse; he accepted what happen and started to move on. But before he could reach Steve outside the door(meaning before Steve could help him), he had to help him self.
Tell me if im wrong . . . .
| Purple-Soda-Art chapter 12 . 6/30/2013
Such a cute ending! DUM-E, your so thoughtful. Tony must have made some really smart machines to be able to know when a human is crying and bring them tissue. Wish I had a DUM-E, he could do all my homework and chores, then when he's done, we watch cartoons together. hee hee!
Anyway, getting side-tracked.
This was such a tearful chapter. For a moment I thought Steve would be gone too long and Tony would die. Don't scare people like that! Almost passed out cause I thought it was all over and the next chapter would be a funereal scene.
My gosh the place would be packed. All those people would be there for his death, but not when he actually needed a friend to stop him from pulling the reactor out of his chest. huh, go figure!
Well, im glad Steve did make it! yay! It felt like a ton of bricks were lifted off my chest, when Tony finally told the captain, what happen. Thank goodness! Now they can have sex- I mean Tony can start to heal! Yup, "HEAL", heal right up.
| Purple-Soda-Art chapter 11 . 6/30/2013
OH MY GOSH NO! NO! NO! NO! you put that back in now, mister Stark!
Don't kill yourself, your just gonna hurt Steve more! He still loves you! Ugh! Tony is so broken. Why did you leave Steve? You know he's just dealing. He still needs your help.
Steve doesn't realize how bad off Tony is. I didn't know he was hearing voices. My gosh! Aint no telling what else is wrong with the man. He should have told Steve, everything from the start.
Tony needs his Cappy-tan!
im am loving this story. Please! Don't kill Tony. He's too sexy to die.
| Purple-Soda-Art chapter 10 . 6/30/2013
"His shield. The ring's made out of his shield."
Oh! That so meaningful. Love it! that was very creative, very good idea. So sweet and it seems like something Steve would do for his Tony.
And i know I shouldn't have, but I cheered when Tony said . . . .
"WHO WANTS TO SEE ME MAKE OUT WITH CAPTAIN AMERICA?!"
im sorry i have a problem . . . Hey, don't look at me like that! Your the one who wrote it! You knew what you were doing when you put it in there!
I know Tony is dealing with a lot. But why did he have to get drunk? Why doesn't he just talk to Steve. You don't want him to leave, so stop distancing yourself. Ugh! it just so sad. I promised myself i wouldn't cry when i last reviewed. Ugh! I'm such a pansy.
I can actually answer both questions.
Drinking just helps with the pain. He needs a pain reliever.
He won't talk to Steve because Tony feels like he is not good enough for him. The captain is so pure and innocent. And he(tony) is so damaged and broken, been this way all his life. He doesn't want The Captain to be tainted by his baggage.
tell me if im wrong . . .
Now if I where Steve, I would slap some sense in him! And then tell him all that is utter bull sheez! Then i would make "hard and long" love to him. Until he submits to my will. Until he admits to being an idiot and beg for my forgiveness.
But of course it going to take a lot more that that, to fix Tony. the man was only tortured for a week and a half, non-stop! Jeez poor Tony . . .
| Purple-Soda-Art chapter 9 . 6/30/2013
TT its still so sad! Tony is so broken! Ugh! Im actually shedding tears as I type this review.
*getting the keyboard wet* MY TONY! oh sob, oh cry! boo who! boo who!
3 hours of crying later . . .
Im good, im good. Had to get that out, I'll be fine. I realized im crying over a fictional story, Jeez! I must pull myself together! (slap!) c'mon! Women up! review the story now, damn it! no tears!
(i swear im not insane! . . . or im I?)
Anyway, I'm so glad they finally had sex- I mean spoke to each other! Can't be in a relationship without communication. Too bad it still didn't change anything, so sad. (no more tears!)
Maybe a therapy would help. He has some serious physiological issues. He had those even before the creatures tortured him, they just added on to the damage already there. but that doesn't excuse them for what they did. VEIL DEMONS! Hope they had slow painful deaths.
In other news . . . . I know this was a few chapters ago, but i must ask!
That whole scene with Loki, was that suppose to be a foreshadowing. Hmmmm? Is Loki finally going to join the good? hee hee! I hope he does. I always had a soft spot for him. I think a lot of avengers fans did . . . well maybe?
The part where Natasha was looking Loki in the eyes. She sworn the last time she saw them, they were blue not green. So in your version, while Loki was taking over New York he was under the influence of the Tesseract? Nice! i like that version very much. It means he wasn't really evil! yay! maybe a very angry person, but not evil! W00P!
Please let me know if im wrong . . . .
| Purple-Soda-Art chapter 8 . 6/30/2013
Aw! Tony! Why don't you stay in bed with Steve and make love- I mean cuddle some more.
Naw, im just kidding. Sex is the last thing Tony needs right now. Poor Tony! So sad, i literary weep for him.
(T0T) Whyyyyyyyyyyyyyy! My poor Tony, oh gosh why! Did those things just torture him for the fun of it? BASTARDS! no not even that's a mean enough word, none of the curse words in the human language are! I must thing of a new curse word that's out of this world! Like Thor said there was nothing human about them.
MA-HEE-DE-DIGGLE-MI-HIT! sorry for my foul new word, i know it is truly horrid, i will refrain from using it . . .
| Purple-Soda-Art chapter 5 . 6/30/2013
I would love to leave more reviews, but my computer is being stupid right now. Idk whats wrong with it. So I have to review when I can. sorry.
Anyway! Oh my goodness, this is a chilling story. I keep thinking Tony is going to die. Its mind boggling! I would cry a thousands tears if he died. Oh and poor Steve, couldn't even imagine what he would do. I'd might actually feel sorry for those creatures or for that whole planet; of where they came from. might!
Omg! Agent Coulson! So happy to see him! (or read him)! love the way you brought him in. All quite and easy. Most people already know about the rummer he might be coming back. That's like a "duh!" moment. Have you not seen the com-icon videos! The whole Avengers cast keeps hinting that he going to appear in the new movies. And i keep reading about it all over Avenger related fan sites. But, if he doesn't come back, there might be a riot. So he better be alive in the new movies or else . . . . * lights up mob torch*
| Purple-Soda-Art chapter 4 . 6/30/2013
OH MY GOSH! WHAT THE HECK!?
im so scared right now!
| Violet Scott chapter 16 . 6/10/2013
...When's the sequel you speak of...? :((
| fangirling so hard right now chapter 16 . 3/21/2013
Wow. Great story. Few make my emotions run as this one did. One moment I was happy the next on the verge of tears. Very well written with a great plot line. Good job.
| PurpleSong chapter 16 . 2/15/2013
Amazing.. Nothing less and a lot more.. I dot need to comment ever thing I liked about it, cause it would be I'm gonna comment one thing. The characters persinalities, expesially tony, were out standing. I have read a lot of ffs where the characters moves on too fast and everything is just too occed.. You'res were fantastic and spot on. Thank you for posting it..