|Reviews for Agony|
| mlegates1 chapter 11 . 11/30/2012
I really love this story and I think you should continue it please.
| Mlegates1 chapter 11 . 10/13/2012
i luv this story I hope you could keep writing it cuz it's really good.
| cola50 chapter 9 . 9/15/2012
u need to write more, can't wait for it
| cola50 chapter 8 . 8/8/2012
awesome! you should so write more! P
| cola50 chapter 5 . 8/8/2012
| cola50 chapter 7 . 7/24/2012
amazing story, its very good. P
| EllieEpicJellie chapter 6 . 6/26/2012
Wow I love your story! And the supernatural elements are really cool (: please continue I really want to find out what happens, is dove still going to the Forest!
| PellinoreWarthrop'sApprentice chapter 6 . 6/19/2012
I like the story. It's really emotional and deep. I was a bit confused at the first Ray scene and had to re-read it a few times. But aside from a few technical errors (just sporadically, nothing too bad) it's really good. I think your real strength is in your dialogue scenes. They show the character relations well. Your weakest point is probably repetition. It might just be because that's her character but it seems there is a lot of repetition that kind of clogs up the story. All together I'd say your much better at writing than I was at your age and just to keep writing. That's the main key at getting better. Knowing your flaws, knowing your strengths, and working on/playing off of both. I'll definitely read the series and keep posted on this story. :)
-Dr. Warthrop's dedicated apprentice
| Jinx Kalantha chapter 3 . 6/12/2012
Whoa! Reviewing my own story and I think it's flipping' awesome!
(The fact that I'm reviewing it, not what I actually wrote. I leave that up to you...If anyone actually R&R'S! Ahhh...I'm so FLIPPIN' ALONE!