|Reviews for Making the Truth Known|
| Phoenyx-Fyre-Writer chapter 14 . 2/22
Ok, this is going to be a long review so get buckled in.
When I first read the summary I admit I was turned off by the idea of an mpreg story, thats usually a big no-no for me, but I decided to give it a go anyway as well I like you and you've read and reviewed a fair few of my stories so I thought it was only right for me to give yours a go.
I have to say though I love it, there are a few bits I'm unsure about, but for the most part it is an awesome story!
Now I loved the animosity between Harry and Remus, I don't normally like Remus as the bad guy, but this time I had to admit I loved it that Harry acted like a normal teenager and held a grudge. I think it totally fits his personality to forgive any slights against himself, but not his Daddy. I am however glad he is now calling him Uncle Remus and - hopefully - starting to forgive him. I love how protective of Sirius Harry is and visa versa.
I love your Draco! I always thought he could have been so much better if Harry hadn't snubbed him or he'd been given a chance to get out of his fathers thumb. Draco is the perfect big brother for Harry now. I love reading stories where Draco is good and is a Black not a Malfoy and this one is a good one.
I also love that Harry is friends/brothers with Neville, I think Neville's just far to under used in canon and gets a bad rep. I love Neville and think you've really brought out the best in him in this story. I mean how can anyone who defies Tom so bravely be so under used? I love how Harry and Draco are bringing out the confidence in him as well as the rest of his family.
Ron's a jealous git who totally deserved to have to spend the night in the infirmary. I wished Draco had gotten properly poisonous spiders and they'd done him some lasting damage, though that might have gotten Harry into more trouble and poor Sirius would have to be even more stern.
I really like your Sirius, I think he's pretty awesome and a great Lord Black/Lord of Hogwarts, he's managed to get the perfect balance between fun, firm, and loving in his parenting of Harry.
I think your Dumbledore deserves to be fed to the acromantulas, though it might make them sick so that would be a bit mean. He's truly despicable and screwed up so many lives. I hate him and can't wait to find out what his punishment is.
Remus and Lily as a couple I have to admit I love. I'm normally a canon shipper with them, but Remus and Lily in my opinion work quite well. I mean they have very similar personalities and would work well as a couple, but Remus wouldn't encroach on James' perceived territory when he knows James loves Lily, but in this case Lily and James were adoptive siblings so it makes sense. A lot more sense than some of the SeverusXLily stories I've read. Severus has to be very different for me to accept him as Harry's father.
Now the Hermione/Leilani thing I'm a bit unsure about, but I'll withhold judgement until I find out more about Leilani, with the way you were writing Hermione I was kind of thinking this was Hermione bashing which I think is fine in the right circumstances, but for her to change and Harry to forgive her so easily is a little difficult for me to accept.
Now the animagus forms! I love them, especially Draco's. How did you think of them? I always struggle coming up with animagus forms and patronus shapes.
I love Reggie! I think he's super cool as a father and Uncle and Siri and Reggie needed to be reunited and the truth to become known.
Umm I think that's all for now, until your next chapter.
| Guest chapter 14 . 2/13
can u please hurry up and update i really want 2 know what is going 2 happen next
| pixy chapter 1 . 2/9
(big sad eyes)
Where did the reading version go? I really enjoyed it & was going to re-read it when I noticed that it has vanished!
I loved it! I love the interaction between Sirius & James. I also love the interactions between the boys, the Potter parents & Grandfather Black :)
Dumbledoor better watch out. The Black in Dorea has awaken.
| Stars4jj chapter 14 . 2/8
I love love love this story! It is such a wonderfully different view of the books. Please keep writing and posting so I can keep being enthralled.
| slyhuff chapter 14 . 2/8
wow thats great, loved this fic, i hope dumbles gets a meaningful punishment
| Guest chapter 14 . 2/6
I love the new chapter for this story and I can't wait for me. I also really enjoye your charcters read of this but its disappered, please don't tell you've been asked to take it down? x
| Mackenzied3333 chapter 14 . 2/6
please upload soon
| heavenrain chapter 1 . 2/6
I like the story I am also looking for a reading making the truth known can u help me
| guest chapter 14 . 2/3
i really love that story . and i hope u update soon. i am a big fan of all of your stories .
| lilyflower101 chapter 14 . 2/3
aww poor harry. hope sirius gets back soon. :)
| Albionia chapter 14 . 2/2
Brilliant chapter, really really good.
| lovingsiri chapter 14 . 2/2
I was so happy for the new chapter. I'm looking forward to the New story
| Diamondgirl3 chapter 14 . 2/2
Love Chewy and Spitfire! Great names! I can't wait to find out Dumbledore's punishment, and I hope we get to see some of the trial.
| Guest chapter 9 . 2/1
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| computer5450 chapter 14 . 2/2
Serves Dumbledore right for what he did. Thank you for this story .