Reviews for Body of Lies
Ivansama chapter 2 . 6/28/2013
sorry i will not read this longer the idea is not bad but its very confusing
Slytherin Studios chapter 4 . 9/11/2012
I love your story, please update soon.
PontyBoy chapter 4 . 6/14/2012
Enjoying the story. But could you put a explanation up of the past and how Jack is Harry?
Guest chapter 1 . 6/14/2012
There's AU Harry Potter and there's this. You better put this so called fic into the crossover section. Crossover with Fail.
Prongslet chapter 1 . 6/10/2012
Wow, this looks great :-) It is well written, didn't find any major grammar mistakes and you manage to capture my attention with who you portray Jack as a man with secrets without saying so directly. I want to continue to read this if only to figure Jack out.

I like the way you keep us in the dark about him by simply not telling us; of course Jack isn't going to narrate about his past to himself and we have to find out with everyone else. That is a writing skill I envy since I use a lot of information dumps in bulky and long phrases.

I would really like to see this continued, 'cause at the rate you are going I think you will have a reader in me :-D
raul1331 chapter 1 . 6/10/2012
wtf?