Reviews for L'éléphant de Carter
Sierra Sutherwind chapter 1 . 1/11/2020
This story is amazing, it's fun, just as any good old HH episode. It shows us the beautiful friendship between Carter, Newkirk and LeBeau. It also pictures an average night in the barracks, where 15 men have to share basically everything. I love the way the writer resumes the nightmares those men may endure, completely understandable under the circumstances.
The dialog is light, fun, to the point. I can hear them perfectly well - even if it's in French :) It also has a touch of tenderness and nostalgia because of how the war is affecting them in their personal lives.
Bref, cette histoire est écrite avec amour et une profonde connaissance des personnages et de leurs préoccupations. Félicitations.
rose-of-eden chapter 1 . 12/28/2015
J'aime ça! Bravo! :o)
marie chapter 1 . 2/9/2013
bonne histoire dans l'esprit d'hogan's héroes.
Chrichri457 chapter 1 . 6/13/2012
Cool j'ai beaucoup aimée en tout cas

(ps son nom c'est Petit daim agile qui traverse la grande foret )
Cristy W-S chapter 1 . 6/11/2012
I'm so looking forward to reading this, but since my French is practically nonexistant, I'm going to ask my Canadian friend to translate or I'll run it through an online translator.

Glad to see another new story from you! :)
Linorea chapter 1 . 6/11/2012
J'adore la façon dont tu fais évoluer l'histoire d'un titre qui peut paraître humoristique au cauchemar de Carter. Et la façon dont Newkirk puis Lebeau viennent l'aider à en parler, alors qu'ils le connaissent à peine... Je les adore !

Oh et comme je te l'ai déjà dis, le cauchemar de la marmotte dans le tunnel, c'est bien trouvé
dust on the wind chapter 1 . 6/10/2012
Oh, this is just delightful - the opening description of the barracks at night is beautifully done (most especially the concise but perfectly detailed soundscape!) and leads very naturally into the body of the work.

Carter's dream is really convincing, and very much in character - and incidentally, you've got some of the best delineation of his physical characteristics I've seen.

A very good, and very effective character piece.

dust...
Marie1964 chapter 1 . 6/10/2012
I love Carter-Newkirk stories, but my French is only at a high school level. I really hope you translate this one day! :)