Reviews for How Quickly is Forever
GeezerWench chapter 5 . 2/23/2014
Jacob has a point, but he doesn't know how he'll feel in a year or two.

In another couple years, Nessie will be full grown.
GeezerWench chapter 4 . 2/23/2014
Well now. Bella cheated on Edward.

He'll see that in Jake's head.
GeezerWench chapter 3 . 2/23/2014
Bella jealous? Could be.

I feel bad for Jacob, and I hardly ever feel bad for him.

Even Nessie. A little bit. I was 15 once ... a very long time ago.
GeezerWench chapter 2 . 2/23/2014
Whoa Nessie!

Rosalie ... Nessie may be a bit young, but at least Rosalie hasn't given her the books with the big X's on them.


Bella does need a stinkin' hobby.
GeezerWench chapter 1 . 2/23/2014
A bustier? For a “15” year old?

Edward! Always yanked my chain that he wouldn’t tell Bella things and now he’s doing it again!

Why on earth would Alice buy Nessie a cake knowing she doesn’t like them?

Carlisle’s exams – I have to agree with Nessie on this one. Constant poking and prodding would be annoying and embarrassing. I mean, WTH?

Bella's having a total fit because Nessie is acting like a hormonal teenager.

I'm surprise Edward isn't. But he can read Jacob's mind. I guess that helps.

"Rejection hurts." And, once again, Edward doesn't explain.

I take it Nessie tried to kiss Jacob and he turned her down.
kat kasie chapter 12 . 2/10/2014
Well now I'm depressed thanks good story even though there's lots of angst
PastOneonta chapter 12 . 11/8/2013
This was amazing. I can only imagine what it took emotionally and creatively to write. The J / R imprint has to be one of the most ill conceived plot inventions in any fiction anywhere. So many of us view it as a lazy means to an end: end the triangle and keep the werewolf in the plot. The abuse of a beloved character writing this effectively would be tough. And the thought of readers' expectations would be daunting.

Tremendous story, believeable, legitimate, coherent characters and plot. Jacob forever loving and giving. Vampires forever selfish and insincere. I felt bad for R, she had been raised as the center of the universe so naturally was selfish. But Jake was honest with her and told her he didn't see her that way. If only she had been offered more of a life. The wolves and Billy were so well written, Quil helped Jacob and then Sam unraveled the imprint lore for him. I was glad Seth and Leah went to school, that made sense for what we knew of them. Billy as loving Dad still guiding his son.

R. Death was a tragedy, but it set Jacob free. I was so happy to see he had the courage to leave Bella. He couldn't help her at that point. He had tried but she made her choice then and 6 years previous. Edward was a surprise, running from Bella once it stopped being fun. He is so despicable, and his mind so messed up. I don't think Carlisle could stop him.

Great story, thanks for working through it and sharing it.
JacobB'sImprintee chapter 12 . 10/20/2013
I can't believe I actuallyvread all of this. My heart is broken and I'm bawling. I thought for sure you'd have Bella and Jacob be together in the end. That's not right.
JacobB'sImprintee chapter 1 . 10/20/2013
U have absolutely no idead how much thus disgusts me. Y am I reading this? Only from my favorite authors would I even consider this story. Damn curiosity. After seeing this story for the longest time, I finaally gave in. Damn u.
pece87 chapter 12 . 4/15/2013
Although this ended up a sad and depressing story, I liked it. It definitely was something different and I have quite a few B/J favorite stories.
I feel the same way as Jake, happy for him but still guilty. I hope he had a great life and had kids and what not.
Poor Bella! How sad. This may have been an epilogue I still wonder what happen to her. Did she ever even feed? Oh my god and what about Charlie? He was never mentioned in your story?
Man and Edward! So does he consider him and Bella divorced? Does he not miss the rest of the Cullens?
pece87 chapter 11 . 4/15/2013
Maybe Edward just left to feed.
Did they have sex again after everything? It just seems morbid.
pece87 chapter 10 . 4/15/2013
WiLL I find out if Edward knows?
Sam seems like such an *ss, no compassion for what Jake is going through. Technically shouldn't Jake have started it all, he is rightful alpha.
Okay now I started crying when Jake did when he was talking to his dad.
pece87 chapter 9 . 4/15/2013
This chapter was... oh my god.
Jake didn't imprint, how?
Quil ratting on Jake!
And... :( Ness, I was so shocked! Flabbergasted! That took the breath out of me. I just ugh I don't know what to say.
"I saw." :'(
pece87 chapter 8 . 4/15/2013
Their not exactly being careful!
Man whats gonna happen?
pece87 chapter 7 . 4/15/2013
So this won't be a HEA? Well okay, something new lol
D*mn it! I really thought they would of been caught.
Alice knows! Ah, if only Jake had that kind of thought process he could use lol
I don't get whats going on with the imprint, I guess you've kind of changed it up a bit, because how SM has it, the imprint pulls you two together, Jake shouldn't be separated from Ness like it's somebody normal. But I like this, it's a new twist!
Oh that's so sad that Billy gets creeped out by her. I wonder what it is exactly.
Oh man! Quembry lmao what is all three of them together named? Jaqubry? lol But I love them altogether. I like how you write them. The porn really? Guys are weird, I don't get how they can watch it with guys and be comfortable with it lol
Wow, didn't take long for Jake to go there did it? So the big imprint question is, how is he inlove with Bella even though he is imprinted with Renesmee? :/
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