|Reviews for Homecoming|
| jclark775 chapter 2 . 10/9
I really enjoyed this story, it was week written. The part about Haru being Abel's rib was pretty ingenious. Was that your own idea?
| crackdmoon chapter 2 . 12/26/2012
I love this! Do you have any more?
| Heartless Lotus chapter 1 . 6/18/2012
It's kind of ironic that Naoya have a title of 'Holy' when he despise god, but this story is interesting! Too bad it's only one-shot.
Aww, I love how Abel's been worried, waiting and searching for his beloved brother. I laughed when I read that he would invade heaven for his brother and Lucifer would hand him over
But still, I think child!Naoya is just so cute...! Even though he's feisty and arrogant? XD;;
It took me a few seconds to wonder who is En-Suk, and I only know that it's Keisuke thanks to Lady Ori/Midori.
Write more! I love this!
| Green Sprout chapter 1 . 6/10/2012
I like this; it gives more background story and how the whole gang is tied together, but I couldn't figure out who Yuzu/Keisuke/etc. might be, or who in this yet.
I did figure out Gin first, among other things, but I liked him the most next to Atsuro in the actually game, not counting Cain/Naoya.
Still keep up the good work.