Reviews for Echo and Narcissus
rabbit161101 chapter 1 . 4/28
I guess I'm just upset because I never got a chance to tell you I love you.
Great you broke my heart.
Carly Carnations chapter 1 . 10/2/2014
Oh my god... Why you do this to me?
Danny Barefoot chapter 1 . 2/22/2014
That was a terribly painful ending, after you'd put Johanna through much worse than most other fanfics I've read, the hope-spot and collapse were perfectly timed. This story deals very well with the Victors' post-game aggressive manifestations of trauma as well. Finnick wasn't characterised as deeply as Johanna, but Johanna and her family were done very well indeed.
Starcalista chapter 1 . 1/4/2014
This was so beautifully tragic. I love your writing. I hope you write more FinnickJohanna...
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Jane chapter 1 . 7/31/2013
This. Was. Perfect. I have very few words for this. It was so beautifully tied together. Just wow. You're awesome.
icecoldfairy chapter 1 . 6/12/2013
This was so amazing! I nearly cried at the end :(
A Hopeful Voice chapter 1 . 7/17/2012
This is one of the most beautiful and heartbreaking stories I have ever read. You have completely blown me away. Thank you for such a wonderful read.
ReaderofStories chapter 1 . 7/6/2012
Truly amazing writing. I'm blown away by this one-shot. It was just fantastic. Great job.

I hope you have more stories! :)
I Smile For Style chapter 1 . 6/28/2012
This is the BEST oneshot I've ever read (seriously)! I have only two words to describe this: PERFECT and FLAWLESS!

I was never into the whole Finnick/Johanna pairing, but your story TOTALLY changed my mind and now I find myself rooting for them instead of Finnick and Annie!

And in the end, I actually found myself in tears, that's how much your story moved me...
I loved the bittersweetness of it all, and I really hope that you write more oneshots on this pairing in the future!
I look forward to reading more stories from you :)
Hungergamesluver54367 chapter 1 . 6/23/2012
YOu are the best writer ever.

I have never felt this way about a fanfic before. You MADE Johanna. This is a beautiful story.

I hope you continue to write, in the future. This is brilliant.
Francesca chapter 1 . 6/11/2012
Hello, I just wanted to congratulate you on a lovely, poignant, horribly sad story. It was truly amazing, even if it did make me really depressed! An unusual pairing that I really enjoyed :) xxx
sinuk chapter 1 . 6/10/2012
Everything about this was perfect and extremely well written. You are a fantastic writer.
SamiCatalfumo chapter 1 . 6/10/2012
Honestly, the first reviwer took the words from my mind.

This was (more than) everything for which I was hoping and nothing I was expecting. Marvelous.

I was expecting something great- don't get me wrong- but I was not prepared foraything of this magnitude. The last part brought me inches from tears, and I have only cried reading fanfic once. Definitely the tragic story I wanted and definitely the newest edition to my favorites. Probably the one I'd rank #1 if you could rank favorites. Some stories I've favorited just to keep track of, without packing my inbox full with e-mail alerlts, instead of because I actually love them. This, however, is definitely not one of those.

Thank you, so much. I adore this. 3
spellrie chapter 1 . 6/10/2012
This was unbelievably perfect. Every single word was delivered flawlessly. Every passage left emotional impact and heartbreak. This story is a true gift to the HG Fanfiction section, and it's the best gift anyone could ever receive.

The characterization of Johanna was so well thought-out and believable. It's perfection, and it makes you realize that there is so much more to know about different characters in these books. You make Johanna better than Suzanne Collins can make Katniss. That's how good your writing for her is. The aspects of her District, family; it all was ideal and flawless.

I also love that you incorporated Greek mythology in this. Especially the tale of Echo; it's one of my favorites. And it fits in perfectly with this story's concept.

You make Finnick and Johanna so beautiful and heart-wrenching. They are one of my favorite ships, and this is the reason why. Their dialogue towards one another was great, and the way Johanna speaks to that D4 monument is extremely sad. I could imagine her trying to find the correct words like that.

The last parts were escecially heartbreaking. When Finnick calls Annie's name. I'm crying.

All in all, this is the best Fanfiction that I have ever read. This story is a true masterpiece that should not be passed up. This story has changed my sights on Johanna and Finnick's true situation, and the sights are so magical and believable. If that makes any sense.

Well, I've rambled enough. You. Are. Perfect.