Reviews for Square One
iDunnoWho chapter 8 . 6/19/2012
wowww. wowwwww. i read this chapter three times cause its THAT GOOD.
80 Montana chapter 8 . 6/18/2012
Another great chapter. I loved how you went through Miranda's important memories. It is a quick way to show how much she has grown from her father's shadow to the women who would do anything to bring Shepard back. Also, appreciate the amount of effort you put to get medical procedures correct. I'm no doctor, but it was it was convincing to me. The whole chapter was very touching. Well good luck to you.
ipass chapter 8 . 6/18/2012
You are mean. I was doing my Math homework and took a little break when I got the new chapter alert to read it. I got teary eyed by the end and now it looks like I'm almost crying because of my Math hw. I had to turn my back toward my siblings or I'd look silly. Anyway, awesome chapter! T_T I hope nothing severe will happen to Miranda.
commandocucumber chapter 8 . 6/18/2012
How is it that every chapter manages to be more touching than the last.

loved the "violators will be shot" moment. Sheer heart-melting awsome!

This procedure would perhaps have worked better if it were Garrus or Joker. Someone who'd been with him through all the most defining moments of the war, but doesn't quite have the same emotional engagment that Miri does.
orenjikitty chapter 8 . 6/18/2012
I'm sobbing legit tears. Miri...
CyanB chapter 8 . 6/18/2012
You made me cry. Now I have to explain, to my husband, why I'm crying before going to bed.

You write some very powerful scenes.
Follower38 chapter 7 . 6/18/2012
Very very nice
iDunnoWho chapter 7 . 6/16/2012
this is th fic. E V E R.
Dracconnis chapter 7 . 6/15/2012
LOved it!an excellent update
FloridaMagpie chapter 7 . 6/15/2012
Quite a sweet sisterly scene here, and I definitely prefer your idea for Miranda's role in the war. Effing Jessica Chobot, taking up a perfectly good room that could have been full of someone useful (not to mention at least marginally likeable) like Miranda or Jack.
general-joseph-dickson chapter 7 . 6/15/2012
Nice job, more work to be done now.
ipass chapter 7 . 6/15/2012
Why are your chapters so short? I need moooooorre!

jk, ] no pressure. Keep up the good work!
CyanB chapter 7 . 6/15/2012
Darn right it should have been!

Love this chapter.
LC chapter 6 . 6/14/2012
This has been most enthralling thus far. I do have an idea for a future chapter that may or may not be rather interesting:

A flashback chapter in which Miranda and the crew either find Shepard dead or learn about his death, and the effect it has on them, with the emphasis of course being on Miranda.

Anyway, looking forward to the progression of this story.
Janizary chapter 6 . 6/14/2012
Nice save, Li!
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