|Reviews for Ruin of Souls|
| Madebyme chapter 4 . 6/11/2012
Not only is it great to see a fic from you but it's a lovely chunky one too, allowing me to wallow quite happily in your awesome case fic!
I loved the twists and turns to the case and how in sync the boys were, how sharp the banter was and how you captured the perfect balance of brotherly concern mixed with snark! Oh, how I've missed your writing!
I like see the boys when they're both a little worst for wear, I love seeing all brotherly concern and bro-mos that this creates and this fic was crammed with them. Plus, I especially enjoyed Dean's worry and teasing about Sam's hearing, a lovely touch to the fic.
Thank you so much for sharing this wonderful zine fic with us, I've had a blast reading it and I do hope to see more from you soon. Take care, :)
| skag trendy chapter 1 . 6/11/2012
Great start, hon. Sam's caffeinated nerves actually had my knees jumping as though they'd electrocuted!
| CeCe Away chapter 4 . 6/11/2012
What's not to love about a good old case-fic with angry spirits? This has some great imagery. I esp. like this one:
*Her shrunken form was leathery brown, and Sam could see Elisabeth's spirit, superimposed over her body.*
Ooo, I could just see that and got chills.
| Scullspeare chapter 4 . 6/11/2012
I re-read this with breakfast this morning - what a great casefic to kick off the week, full of the brothers working together, being smart, teasing each other and looking out for each other. *Happy sigh* All the things that make SPN great!
Loved the banter, especially when poor Sam was having trouble hearing. :-)
Awesome work. Thanks for a great read.
| Zinfer chapter 4 . 6/11/2012
That was delightful! Great brotherly banter and a good adventure:)
| apieceofcake chapter 4 . 6/11/2012
Enjoyed, thank you :-)
| Wallflowergirl chapter 3 . 6/11/2012
I think I mentioned this earlier, but I really enjoy your dialogue - I can exactly hear the boys speaking as you've written them. And you've got their 'concern for each other hidden under snarkiness' perfect too. The limp!Sam fangirl in me is just loving all the shivering and patchy hearing... and you threw in a little strangulation too :-D
| Wallflowergirl chapter 2 . 6/11/2012
What a lovely chapter - full of everything I love about Supernatural :-) Hurt Sam (of course) with hypothermic Sam, too, which is something I've been craving recently, for some reason; Dean being awesome and coming to rescue his little brother, plus then Dean being awesome and taking care of his little brother; Sam having some extra health issues... and a strong hint that there's more to this hunt than they thought.
On to chapter 3!
| SamDeanLover28 chapter 3 . 6/11/2012
| Wallflowergirl chapter 1 . 6/11/2012
Ha - even as Dean was pulling over I was telling him not to be stupid ;-) Although at least now they know there's a spirit situation here.
I love how you write their interaction - I can completely imagine them saying these things: humorous but at the same time concerned for each other.
And now Sam is lying unconscious in the wet leaves :-0
Rushing on to chapter 2...
| agent iz hyper chapter 4 . 6/11/2012
Aw, that was cute. x) Got all the awesomeness of the Winchester bros, yay! Loved it. :D
| pandora jazz chapter 4 . 6/10/2012
What a wonderful story. :)
I loved the mystery and you did a great job with the brothers voices.
You had just the right amount of hurt Dean and Sam, plus we got to have the brothers worry and tend to each other's injuries.
This story would have made a perfect episode. I could picture it playing out on the screen while I read it.
I really enjoyed reading it.
Thanks for sharing another one of your stories with us.
Until next time, take care.