|Reviews for that Stark girl|
| Xel Xibalba chapter 34 . 3/6
Please update soon! I love this story! I love how believable the characters are throughout all of this!
| Diclonious57 chapter 34 . 3/3
Hurry up and update!
| Guest chapter 34 . 2/22
Geez when I started reading this story I was convinced that was a completed one and now I have to wait, and for the part I was looking forward since it was mentioned the first time, the banquet!
I really don't know how I'll wait.
This story.. Just loving it.
You're such an amazing writer. I kinda love/hate you for all the feelings you made me feel..
Really can't wait for Gendry to see Arya, I just want them together, my poor heart aches too much, my beautiful OTP çwç
I think I rambled enough..
I can leave now, just update ASAP, please?
| MidnightAuroraWolf chapter 34 . 2/9
I don't like or trust dany and I am glad gendry has brienne with him and I would say sandor too but not sure if he made a deal with Danny. I thought Jack was murdered by jaqen in earlier chapter so did jaqen replace him with a faceless man? I don't like dany and her using gendry to further her own agenda. Thanks for the update...
I thought anguy is leaving after he gave gendry the info on the masquerade and such? Can the process done to arya be reversed without what happened to osha having split personality and such?
Does jaqen know anguy is up to something? He seems like he does especially in this chapter..
Looking forward to the masquerade ball..
| Weirdcatlady chapter 34 . 2/3
I'm so happy you've updated! And though I'm looking forward to the Gendry/ Arya POV and eventual meet up, I'm the who's in the background, silently (or not so silently) cheering for a resolution between Sansa and Sandor. Those two need to kiss and make up (read:make out).
| carlita290591 chapter 34 . 2/2
thank you so much!
update soon please :)
and please..I want a kiss ! please please please :D
I hope things get better for you :)
| HarryPotterNut94 chapter 15 . 1/23
Ages in the first book:
Robb and jon: 14, robb is slightly older
Bran: 7, almost 8
Rickon: 3, almost four
A dance with dragons
Robb: dead though would be 17
Sansa: 13, though says she's 14
Bran: 9 or 10
Rickon: 5 or 6
So yeah order is robb jon sansa arya bran and rickon. How old are they all in your story?
| HarryPotterNut94 chapter 10 . 1/23
You are a cruel person. How dare you kill ned again, do you know how painful that was? :(
| HarryPotterNut94 chapter 1 . 1/23
You might want to think about changing some terms to English instead of American. Just a general pet peeve.
But a good idea, I don't usually read modern AU but this looks good (except the American terms in an English-based story).
| Rhaenys chapter 33 . 11/22/2013
First of all, finally an update :D..
Now i can't wait for Arya and Gendry to meet up again.. i haven't read the story in awhile, so i have to reread why Arya chose to join Jaqen and leave..
before i read the final chapters, i'm going to have to reread the whole story.. i want to be able to understand the whole story hehe.. but i don't mind
can't wait for the next update :)
| Guest chapter 33 . 11/16/2013
Yes! Literally a huge smile went on my face when I saw that you had updated!
| allaboutthegame chapter 1 . 11/15/2013
Let me tell how glad I am that you have finally updated this story. I have been waiting a long time. Now I'm afraid you're going to not update very often, so please please please continue to update. This story is really good. Thanks again for the update...
| agatha's wasp chapter 33 . 11/13/2013
When I found out yiu updated I screamed for like an hour xP
I'm so glad you didn't give up on this and might I just add your writing is superb. The best modern AU out there. So in character and so real and exciting. I know its an axg fic but I love that everyone else has pov because it layers the fic. Also I love that Gendry is angry at Arya. He should be. He didn't really want to go after her and that is realistic. Good job on Sandor and Tyrion pov too.
| MidnightAuroraWolf chapter 33 . 11/13/2013
Clearly Jaquen is setting arya up for some grand event that she has to dress up for speak exquisitely etc.. Will she need to assassinate someone? Will she remember in time? Will Edric reappear to cause problems? Will Gendry arrive in time and will he be able to help? Will we learn more about Ned and Robert and the darn will thing? Glad Joff is dead and Sansa killed him in self defense but still sorry she had to lose her virginity to that monster. Review for last chapter and on to a review of this chapter and again thanks for updating.
Loved the anguy/Gendry scenes and loved the idea of a masquerade ball. Love that Gendry has that advantage!
Jack was mormont's asst and Jaquen inside man? Jaquen makes it seem like a small price but in reality it is huge! Emotions are not weaknesses Jaquen! I have a feeling he is going to make Arya go after the wrong people. She is not in control Jaquen is controlling her hopefully Gendry can help save her.
I hope Gendry gets a chance to know Robert better and what Ned might have wanted him to see. Loving the mystery aspect of things. I do not trust Dany either. Still skeptical of Tyrion because he always has a self serving purpose. More later thanks so much for the update. Please update soon.
| MidnightAuroraWolf chapter 32 . 11/13/2013
Love the story and so glad that it has been updated! Love the dynamics and Jaquen is a real psychopath! Hopefully anguy decides to help Gendry. So many good thoughts to convey but will later when I can form more coherent and well thought out feelings and thoughts. Lol