Reviews for My Sister's Shadow
Embrume chapter 5 . 11/21/2014
Pretty good so far! I can't stop reading. The only thing I've really noticed is that you tell a lot instead of showing (i.e. Don't say, "the characters are going to the mall", describe them going there). Telling is really good for some things, but you don't want to use a whole lot of it.
rae chapter 10 . 7/18/2014
im looking forward to either your or the other authprs update on this story, been waitin 4ever lol
elle chapter 1 . 7/22/2013
I really wish you would continue this lovely story, but considering it's been a little over a year since it was updated, you probably won't. :/
Lupe Fiasco chapter 9 . 7/13/2013
Oh dear.
Lupe Fiasco chapter 8 . 7/13/2013
She called Allie Lia. Coincidence?
Lupe Fiasco chapter 7 . 7/13/2013
Aw. Sadness.
Lupe Fiasco chapter 6 . 7/13/2013
So she's on the road to Ana?
Lupe Fiasco chapter 5 . 7/13/2013
Love 3
Lupe Fiasco chapter 4 . 7/13/2013
I love wear this is going!
Lupe Fiasco chapter 3 . 7/13/2013
I think she should've kept the sea glass like Liadid.
Lupe Fiasco chapter 2 . 7/13/2013
Is she gonna take the journals and read them?
Lupe Fiasco chapter 1 . 7/13/2013
Awesome beginning!
Avis chapter 9 . 6/30/2013
I absolutely love everything about this story you are writing. I hope you continue to write it.
Guest chapter 9 . 5/26/2013
Oh, man. This is wonderful. Could you continue it please?
Guest chapter 9 . 12/6/2012
Amazing amazing amazing! Can't wait to read more!
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